聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa shizen de, jikan mo tekitou desu ga, umm ya uh nado no filler ga ooi desu. Motto seikaku na kotoba wo tsukatte, setsumei wo rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Mata, setsumei no naka de rinku kotoba wo tsukatte, hanashi no nagare wo yoku shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on weekends. We often talk about my work at the company and my hobby, which is watching movies. Sometimes, they recommend famous movies to me, which I find really enjoyable.

建議: Kotae ga fukusuu no filler ga ooi no de, motto seikaku na kotoba de setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, hanashi no rikai wo takameru tame ni, rinku kotoba wo tsukatte, hanashi no nagare wo yoku shite kudasai. Jissai no jirei ya riyuu wo kuwashiku setsumei suru to yoi desu.

範例: I usually chat about my work and discuss my company. Since I have to work long hours, we often talk about whether this is good or not and how to improve the situation.

建議: Kotae wa rikai shi yasui desu ga, filler ga ooi no de, motto seikaku na kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, rinku kotoba wo tsukatte setsumei no nagare wo yoku shite kudasai. Konkuriito na riyuu ya jirei wo tsukeru to motto yoku narimasu.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because I can talk about many things and have deeper discussions. In a group, it is harder to speak at length and share my thoughts.

建議: Kotae wa wakari yasui desu ga, filler ga ooi no de, motto seikaku na kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, rinku kotoba wo tsukatte hanashi no nagare wo yoku shite kudasai. Konkuriito na riyuu ya jirei wo tsukeru to yoku narimasu.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because I can see people's facial expressions and emotions, which helps me understand them better.

建議: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, filler ya kurikaeshi ga ooi desu. Motto seikaku na kotoba de setsumei shi, rinku kotoba wo tsukatte hanashi no nagare wo yoku shite kudasai. Konkuriito na riyuu ya jirei wo tsukeru to yoku narimasu.

範例: I don't often argue with my friends because it can lead to fights or awkward situations when opinions differ. Therefore, I try to avoid arguments to maintain good relationships.

× I talked a lot with my friends about uh umm, my company, you know my work or my hobby, which is watching movies.

✓ I talk a lot with my friends about, um, my company, you know, my work or my hobby, which is watching movies.

The question is in present tense asking about general habits, so the verb should be in present tense 'talk' instead of past tense 'talked'.

× So they sometimes they teach me umm, some famous movies, which is really fun.

✓ So sometimes they teach me, um, about some famous movies, which is really fun.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'they sometimes they'. Also, 'teach me some famous movies' is awkward; adding 'about' clarifies the meaning.

× I often chat about my work, umm and uh discuss about that umm, my company.

✓ I often chat about my work, um, and discuss that, um, my company.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Removing 'about' after 'discuss' is correct.

× I have to work a lot of time for so long time so we that is good or not.

✓ I have to work a lot for a long time, so whether that is good or not.

The phrase 'a lot of time for so long time' is incorrect. 'A lot' is used without 'of' before uncountable nouns in this context, and 'for a long time' is the correct expression. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well, I prefer the chat with, uh, only one friend than a group of people.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than a group of people.

The phrase 'prefer the chat with' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to chat with'. Also, 'than' is used for comparisons, but 'rather than' is more appropriate here.

× I can talk a lot of things with if I talk with only one people and uh, discuss a lot, but if there are some people, I cannot talk a lot and deeply.

✓ I can talk about a lot of things if I talk with only one person and discuss a lot, but if there are some people, I cannot talk a lot and deeply.

'One people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the singular form 'person' should be used. Also, 'talk a lot of things with' is awkward; 'talk about a lot of things' is correct.

× Umm, I prefer to communicate face to face more than more than than, uh, via social media.

✓ Umm, I prefer to communicate face to face more than via social media.

The phrase 'more than more than than' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'more than'.

× When I communicate with people I read, I see their face and their emotion with the facial express expression.

✓ When I communicate with people, I read and see their faces and their emotions through facial expressions.

'Facial express expression' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'facial expressions'. Also, 'face' and 'emotion' should be plural to match the context.

× It is because it can it can cause the fighting or sometimes it could be awkward if there is a you know, differences be the opinions differences.

✓ It is because it can cause fighting or sometimes it could be awkward if there are, you know, differences in opinions.

The phrase 'differences be the opinions differences' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'differences in opinions'. Also, 'the fighting' is better as 'fighting' without 'the'.

× So that's why I don't really argue and a lot I.

✓ So that's why I don't really argue a lot.

The sentence structure is incorrect and awkward. The phrase 'and a lot I' is misplaced and should be removed or reordered to 'argue a lot'.