聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'more than calling'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because, as an introverted person with a busy schedule, I find chatting easier and more accessible than calling.

建議: Be more specific and use clearer linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'something happened to us'. Try to organize your answer logically.

範例: It depends on my mood, but usually we chat about our daily routines and events that happened during the day. For example, sometimes we gossip about other people.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases like 'make make'. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it is more beneficial and less noisy than chatting with a group of people.

建議: Correct grammar mistakes and unclear words like 'prefer meat' (probably 'prefer meet'). Use linking words and be more precise in your explanation.

範例: As I mentioned, I am an introverted person and prefer communicating via social media rather than face-to-face meetings because it is more convenient, especially when I am in a hurry or have a busy schedule.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples if possible.

範例: Yes, it is natural to argue with friends sometimes because of differences in opinions or perspectives. Such arguments can even strengthen the relationship.

× I always avoid to calling them because it's more easy and uh, accessibility.

✓ I always avoid calling them because it's easier and more accessible.

The verb 'avoid' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'more easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. 'Accessibility' is a noun and does not fit here; 'more accessible' is the correct adjective form.

× But the main things that we try to chat is about a routine and something happened during the day to us.

✓ But the main things that we try to chat about are routines and things that happened during the day to us.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'a routine' should be plural 'routines' to match 'things'. 'Something happened' should be plural 'things that happened' to be consistent.

× I always avoid to calling them because it's more easy and uh, accessibility.

✓ I always avoid calling them because it's easier and more accessible.

After 'avoid', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. So 'avoid to calling' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid calling'.

× But the main things that we try to chat is about a routine and something happened during the day to us.

✓ But the main things that we try to chat about are routines and things that happened during the day to us.

The verb 'chat' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when indicating the topic. So 'chat is about' should be 'chat about'.

× For example, sometimes gossiping about some people.

✓ For example, sometimes we gossip about some people.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'we' and 'gossip' makes it a complete sentence. Also, 'gossiping' should be changed to 'gossip' as a verb here.

× I like UH and prefer chat. Just one friend.

✓ I like and prefer to chat with just one friend.

The phrase 'prefer chat' is incomplete; it should be 'prefer to chat'. Also, 'UH' is a filler and should be omitted. 'Just one friend' should be connected to the verb properly.

× It's more beneficial and useful and better than chat with a group of people.

✓ It's more beneficial, useful, and better than chatting with a group of people.

After 'than', the verb should be in gerund form 'chatting' to compare actions properly.

× It's very noisy and umm make make.

✓ It's very noisy and makes it hard to concentrate.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'makes it hard to concentrate' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× I'm a introverted person and get along with social media rather than face to face meeting and it's more beneficial for me.

✓ I'm an introverted person and get along with social media rather than face-to-face meetings, and it's more beneficial for me.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. 'Face to face meeting' should be plural 'meetings' and hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× For example, when I'm in hurry or maybe have a busiest schedule, I prefer meat.

✓ For example, when I'm in a hurry or maybe have a busy schedule, I prefer to meet.

The phrase 'in hurry' requires the article 'a' to be 'in a hurry'. 'A busiest schedule' is incorrect; 'busiest' is superlative and should be 'busy schedule'. 'Meat' is a typo for 'meet'.

× Yes, the nature of relationship is based on some difference kind of appearance and comments.

✓ Yes, the nature of relationships is based on some different kinds of appearances and comments.

'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match the context. 'Difference kind' should be 'different kinds' to agree in number. 'Appearance' should be plural 'appearances'.

× Yes, the nature of relationship is based on some difference kind of appearance and comments.

✓ Yes, the nature of relationships is based on some different kinds of appearances and comments.

The adjective 'difference' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'different'.

× And it's very natural to argue and have a competition between 2 friends.

✓ And it's very natural to argue and have competition between two friends.

The article 'a' before 'competition' is unnecessary here. Also, numbers under ten are usually written in words in formal English.