聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and shows your feelings well, but try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make it more coherent. Also, use varied vocabulary to express your thoughts more effectively.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are an important part of my life. They make my days enjoyable and meaningful, and I can always count on their support when I need it.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'however' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to be more specific about the topics you discuss.

範例: We usually talk about our surroundings; however, since we don't meet often, when we do, we share our thoughts, opinions, and family matters to stay connected.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and combine sentences for better flow.

範例: Because I am introverted, I prefer chatting with one friend as it makes me feel comfortable. Although group conversations are enjoyable due to diverse opinions, I usually choose one-on-one talks.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains some errors. Try to use correct expressions and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express our true feelings through facial expressions. However, social media is also useful for staying in touch when meeting in person is difficult.

建議: Your answer is brief and somewhat unclear. Try to give a complete response with linking words and more specific details to explain your point clearly.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue, but it's rare and doesn't affect our friendship. We understand that disagreements are normal among friends.

× I love chatting with my friends always.

✓ I always love chatting with my friends.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'love' to correctly modify it. Placing 'always' at the end of the sentence is unnatural in English and can cause confusion.

× we don't meet so easily with each other.

✓ we don't meet each other so easily.

The phrase 'meet each other' is correct without the preposition 'with'. Using 'with' here is unnecessary and incorrect.

× Though talking in Group is also enjoyable because there are too many opinions, too many thoughts.

✓ Though talking in a group is also enjoyable because there are too many opinions, too many thoughts.

The noun 'group' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× But I always like to talk with 1 friend.

✓ But I always like to talk with one friend.

In formal writing and speech, numbers less than ten are usually written in words. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' for clarity and correctness.

× I would like to say I prefer to communicate face to face because it expresses our feelings, it shows the real feelings of us by our expiration.

✓ I would like to say I prefer to communicate face to face because it expresses our feelings; it shows our real feelings through our expression.

The word 'expiration' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'expression'. Also, 'by our expression' is better replaced with 'through our expression' to convey the intended meaning.

× But social, social media or communication is also good.

✓ But social media communication is also good.

The phrase 'social, social media or communication' is awkward and redundant. Combining 'social media communication' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It's not like it's a hard idea to communicate with people.

✓ It's not difficult to communicate with people.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Simplifying it to 'It's not difficult to communicate with people' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× sometimes argument happens in our friendship, but it's OK.

✓ sometimes arguments happen in our friendship, but it's OK.

The noun 'argument' should be plural 'arguments' because 'sometimes' implies more than one occurrence.