聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel better when I am sad or tired.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không phù hợp và cố gắng giải thích cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

範例: I usually talk to my friends about problems I have recently faced because it helps me reduce stress and feel better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can share my feelings, whether happy or sad, more comfortably.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face with one friend because I can understand their emotions better through facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, it helps me feel more connected and avoid misunderstandings.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh từ không phù hợp để truyền đạt ý kiến hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I think it depends on the situation. If my friend is right and shows me strong evidence, I accept it. But if my friend is wrong, I disagree politely.

× Yes, I love chatting with my friends because they have me unwind and relax after I feel sad or tired.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends because they help me unwind and relax after I feel sad or tired.

The phrase 'they have me unwind' is incorrect. The correct verb to express assistance is 'help', followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. So, 'they help me unwind' is correct.

× Moreover, I think it is a terrible whenever I feel under the weather because my friends is a convenient which uh leave my moods.

✓ Moreover, I think it is terrible whenever I feel under the weather because my friends are convenient and help lift my mood.

The word 'terrible' is used incorrectly without a noun; it should be 'terrible time' or just 'terrible' as an adjective describing the situation. Also, 'my friends is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'my friends are'. The phrase 'which uh leave my moods' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'and help lift my mood' to convey the intended meaning.

× I always talk to my friend about anything I overcome in a short period.

✓ I always talk to my friends about anything I overcome in a short period.

The plural form 'friends' is more appropriate here because the context implies talking to multiple friends, not just one.

× That helps me really stress and decrease pleasures whenever I feel tired or disburse about something.

✓ That helps me reduce stress and decrease worries whenever I feel tired or upset about something.

The phrase 'helps me really stress' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me reduce stress'. 'Decrease pleasures' is incorrect; 'pleasures' is positive, but the intended meaning is likely 'worries' or 'concerns'. 'Disburse' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'upset'.

× Actually, I don't have any friends, so if I have to choose, I would say only one friend because at the time I can say many things such as sorrow or happiness without any worry.

✓ Actually, I don't have many friends, so if I have to choose, I would say only one friend because at that time I can say many things such as sorrow or happiness without any worry.

The phrase 'I don't have any friends' contradicts the later statement about choosing a friend; 'many friends' is more appropriate. Also, 'at the time' should be 'at that time' to refer to a specific moment.

× I prefer communicating face to face with one friends because it allows me to understand the other person emotions better through their facial expressions and tone of voice.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face with one friend because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better through their facial expressions and tone of voice.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'friend' should be singular. Also, 'other person emotions' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'other person's emotions'.

× For example, when I talk to my friends in persons I feel more connected can avoid misunderstandings.

✓ For example, when I talk to my friends in person, I feel more connected and can avoid misunderstandings.

The phrase 'in persons' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in person'. Also, the sentence is missing the conjunction 'and' between 'connected' and 'can avoid'.

× When my friend is correct and busted me by strong evidence, I always UMM argues with my friends.

✓ When my friend is correct and proves me wrong with strong evidence, I always argue with my friends.

'Busted me by strong evidence' is informal and incorrect; 'proves me wrong with strong evidence' is better. 'I always UMM argues' is incorrect; 'I always argue' is correct because 'I' requires the base verb form without 's'.

× But whenever my friends that do not do right thing, I say no.

✓ But whenever my friends do not do the right thing, I say no.

The phrase 'my friends that do not do right thing' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'right thing'. Also, 'that' is acceptable but 'who' is better for people; however, it is optional here.