聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to reduce hesitation and filler words to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Use clear and concise sentences with a direct topic sentence followed by supporting details. For example, start with 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and excited.' Then add a reason or example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and excited. For instance, we often share interesting stories and support each other, which makes our conversations enjoyable and meaningful.

建議: Focus on organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Be specific about the topics you discuss with friends, and give examples to enrich your answer.

範例: We usually chat about sports, such as football and basketball, because we all enjoy watching games. Besides that, we often talk about our personal problems and share experiences to support each other.

建議: Try to express your preference clearly with a topic sentence and explain your reason using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal and comfortable.'

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more personal and comfortable. In a group, it can be noisy and hard to focus on one conversation.

建議: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear preference and then giving reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable and allows me to connect better with friends.'

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable and allows me to connect better with friends. For example, when we meet in person, we can share emotions and understand each other more clearly.

建議: Clarify your answer by stating whether you often argue and explain why. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid hesitation. For example, 'Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we have different opinions, but it helps us understand each other better.'

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we have different opinions. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

× I enjoyed, uh, I enjoy chatting, uh, with friends because, uh, it's uh, uh, it makes me feel excited and extraordinary and it is a good thing.

✓ I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel excited and extraordinary and it is a good thing.

The student incorrectly mixed past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'enjoy'. Since the question is about a general habit, present tense 'I enjoy' is appropriate. Avoid mixing tenses in the same sentence for clarity.

× So for everybody, uh, not so too amazing. Not to me.

✓ So for everybody, it is not so amazing. Not to me.

The phrase 'not so too amazing' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'not so amazing' to express a moderate degree. Avoid using multiple quantifiers together as it causes confusion.

× It is a, uh, important for uh, communication and uh, I like, uh, communic.

✓ It is important for communication and I like communicating.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'important' because 'important' is an adjective here. Also, 'communic' is incomplete; the correct form is 'communicating'. Articles must be used correctly before adjectives and nouns.

× Uh, we always are chatting, uh, with our, uh, uh, our thinking about, uh, uh, football, about any sports, like, uh, uh, basketball team, you send us there.

✓ We are always chatting about our thoughts on football and other sports, like basketball.

The phrase 'we always are chatting' is awkward; 'we are always chatting' or 'we always chat' is better. Also, 'you send us there' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence should be clear and use present continuous or simple present appropriately.

× So also also we always chatting with our problems and the other experience.

✓ We also always chat about our problems and other experiences.

The phrase 'the other experience' is incorrect; it should be plural 'other experiences'. Also, 'we always chatting' lacks auxiliary verb; correct form is 'we always chat' or 'we are always chatting'. Pronouns and verb forms must agree.

× I prefer, I prefer to chatter all the fun, uh, only one friend because yeah, it's, uh, it's, uh, it's good and uh, not, uh, I don't like a good group of chatting.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's good, and I don't like chatting in a group.

The phrase 'chatter all the fun' is incorrect; 'chat' is the correct verb. Also, 'a good group of chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting in a group'. Quantifiers and expressions must be used properly.

× Ah, always I like I like communication. I like communication with face to face because face to face is comfortable for me and I like and I like hanging out with friend and it's a means face to face communication and college face to face communication, yeah, is important for people.

✓ I always like communication. I like face-to-face communication because it is comfortable for me. I also like hanging out with friends. Face-to-face communication, including in college, is important for people.

The phrase 'communication with face to face' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'face-to-face communication'. Also, 'hanging out with friend' should be 'friends' plural. Prepositions and plural forms must be used correctly.

× Uh, always, always I argue with friends because uh, uh, our life, uh, uh, our life, uh, uh, if some friends like, uh, uh, something, uh, maybe you don't like us in the always you, uh, you say what you like and what you don't like. Always you go tell.

✓ I always argue with friends because in our life, if some friends like something that you don't like, you always say what you like and what you don't like. You always tell them.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Always, always I argue' should be 'I always argue'. Also, 'you don't like us in the always you' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence should be in present tense and structured clearly to express habitual actions.