聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также четко выражать мысли. Попробуйте строить предложения с ясным подлежащим и сказуемым, и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is a comfortable way to share news and learn about their interests. We can chat online or in person, which helps us stay connected.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения с правильным порядком слов и избегать повторений. Также стоит использовать связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более связным и понятным.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about school news, extracurricular activities, and sometimes about their dreams or feelings. This helps us understand each other better.

建議: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать более связные предложения с правильным использованием времен и местоимений. Также стоит избегать лишних пауз и уточнять мысли.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is more comfortable. In a group, everyone talks at the same time, and I find it hard to understand what they mean.

建議: Ответ содержит интересную идею, но выражена она нечетко и с ошибками. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также уточнять слова, например, 'body language' вместо 'language of body'.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's emotions through their eyes, hands, and body language. This helps me understand them better.

建議: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать простые предложения, избегать повторений и выражать мысли ясно. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but not angrily. I try to avoid arguments, especially with my best friends, because they are very important to me.

× Yes, I do because for me it's one of the most comfortable way you to, uh, give some news or know some interest in yours and give some information for other people, for example, your friend or family.

✓ Yes, I do because for me it's one of the most comfortable ways to, uh, give some news or know some interests of yours and give some information to other people, for example, your friends or family.

The word 'way' should be plural 'ways' because it is preceded by 'one of the most', which requires a plural noun. Also, 'interest in yours' is incorrect; it should be 'interests of yours' to correctly express possession. Additionally, 'give some information for other people' should be 'give some information to other people' because 'information' is given to someone, not for someone.

× It's can be online or you can get receives from other point of support.

✓ It can be online or you can receive it from other points of support.

The phrase 'It's can be' is incorrect; 'It can be' is correct. 'Get receives' is incorrect; the verb 'receive' should be used without 'get'. Also, 'from other point of support' should be plural 'points of support' to match the context.

× I often chat to with my friend about something new school news or when we want to talk something about for example my school or about extracurricular activities, or when she want me to talk some about her dreams or nightmares or other her moods or thoughts.

✓ I often chat with my friend about some new school news or when we want to talk about, for example, my school or extracurricular activities, or when she wants me to talk about her dreams, nightmares, or other moods or thoughts.

The phrase 'chat to with' is incorrect; 'chat with' is correct. 'Talk something about' should be 'talk about'. 'She want' should be 'she wants' to agree with third person singular. 'Talk some about' should be 'talk about'. 'Other her moods' should be 'other moods' or 'her other moods'.

× or when she want me to talk some about her dreams or nightmares or other her moods or thoughts.

✓ or when she wants me to talk about her dreams or nightmares or other moods or thoughts.

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× I prefer to chat only with one person because As for me it's more comfortable because when you chatting with a group of people, everyone trying to tell something and I don't.

✓ I prefer to chat only with one person because, as for me, it's more comfortable because when you are chatting with a group of people, everyone is trying to say something and I don't.

'As' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence. 'When you chatting' should be 'when you are chatting' to use the correct present continuous tense. 'Everyone trying' should be 'everyone is trying' to include the auxiliary verb for present continuous.

× I don't. I can't understand what everyone want to say or what he or she means.

✓ I don't. I can't understand what everyone wants to say or what he or she means.

The sentence 'I don't.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be connected to the next sentence or clarified. Also, 'everyone want' should be 'everyone wants' to agree with third person singular.

× I can't understand what everyone want to say or what he or she means.

✓ I can't understand what everyone wants to say or what he or she means.

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the singular indefinite pronoun 'everyone'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because only at this way of communicate I can see and understand emotion of my person with which I talked to him and I can see his eyes, I can see his hands or all his language of body.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because only in this way of communicating can I see and understand the emotions of the person I am talking to, and I can see his eyes, his hands, and all his body language.

'Only at this way of communicate' should be 'only in this way of communicating' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. 'Emotion of my person with which I talked to him' is awkward; it should be 'the emotions of the person I am talking to'. 'Language of body' should be 'body language'.

× For me it's more glaring way.

✓ For me, it's a clearer way.

'More glaring way' is incorrect; 'glaring' is not appropriate here. 'Clearer way' better expresses the intended meaning of being easier to understand or perceive.

× Yes I do, I can sometimes do this but not with angry mood or I don't want to give to do worst sync to my friend especially when it's best friend I don't want to argue with them very often.

✓ Yes, I do. I can sometimes do this but not when I am angry, and I don't want to make things worse for my friend, especially when they are my best friend. I don't want to argue with them very often.

'Not with angry mood' should be 'not when I am angry' to use correct expression. 'Give to do worst sync' is incorrect; it should be 'make things worse'. 'It's best friend' should be 'they are my best friend' or 'they are my best friends' depending on context.

× It very much because for me it's very important person for me.

✓ It means a lot because for me, they are very important people.

'It very much' is incomplete; it should be 'It means a lot'. 'It's very important person for me' should be 'they are very important people' to agree in number and pronoun usage.