聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không tự nhiên như 'umm' và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như: 'I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress quickly. However, sometimes it distracts me from my important work.'

範例: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel better when I'm stressed. However, I try to limit chatting when I have important tasks to focus on.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không tự nhiên như 'uh' và câu hỏi tu từ không cần thiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý, ví dụ: 'I usually chat with my friends about their romantic relationships because we are all girls. Also, when I face problems, I ask for their advice.'

範例: I usually talk with my friends about their romantic relationships since we share similar experiences. Additionally, I seek their advice when I encounter difficulties in my life.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để nối ý, ví dụ: 'I prefer chatting with one friend because in a group, messages can be ignored. One-on-one conversations allow better attention and are more meaningful.'

範例: I prefer chatting with a single friend because group chats can be noisy and messages might be ignored. One-on-one conversations help us focus and have more meaningful talks.

建議: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'civilizations' và câu dài không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ: 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and valuable than chatting online.'

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for better understanding and feels more genuine than online chatting.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ và hiện tại đúng cách, đồng thời diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ: 'Yes, I used to argue with my friends when I was young because we didn't understand right or wrong. But now, I rarely argue because I have matured.'

範例: Yes, I used to argue with my friends when I was younger because we didn't know how to handle conflicts. However, now I rarely argue as I have become more mature.

× I like chatting with my friends because, for example, when I feel stressed, I can have somebody to umm, talk with me and I'm gonna feel better sooner.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because, for example, when I feel stressed, I can have somebody to, umm, talk to me and I'm going to feel better sooner.

The phrase 'talk with me' is less natural here; the correct preposition after 'talk' when indicating the person you speak to is 'to'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech.

× But sometimes on the other hand is also distract me from my important works, so I really need.

✓ But sometimes, on the other hand, it also distracts me from my important work, so I really need to be careful.

The phrase 'on the other hand' should be set off by commas. 'Is also distract me' is incorrect; the subject 'it' is missing and the verb should be 'distracts' to agree with singular subject. 'Works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'to be careful' completes the thought.

× I usually chat with my friends about their relationships, uh, especially the romantic relationships because we are girls and girls, are we talking about anything like that?

✓ I usually chat with my friends about their relationships, especially romantic relationships because we are girls and girls usually talk about things like that.

The phrase 'girls, are we talking about anything like that?' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'girls usually talk about things like that' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× And uh, sometimes when I feel something wrong in my life, I always want to have some advices from them.

✓ And sometimes when I feel something wrong in my life, I always want to have some advice from them.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'. The correct form is 'some advice'.

× I'm not comfortable with chatting with a group of people because sometimes when I send my messages, they and then I'm gonna just receive the silent.

✓ I'm not comfortable chatting with a group of people because sometimes when I send my messages, they just ignore them and I just receive silence.

The phrase 'they and then I'm gonna just receive the silent' is ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to clarify that 'they ignore my messages and I just receive silence'. 'Silent' is an adjective; the noun 'silence' is needed here.

× I prefer with the single one because we can pay attention to each other more and makes the conversation worth.

✓ I prefer chatting with a single person because we can pay attention to each other more and make the conversation worthwhile.

'The single one' is unnatural; 'a single person' is better. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'we'. 'Worth' should be 'worthwhile' to correctly describe the conversation.

× I think I'm a strange person in this civilizations because besides the large number of people, I prefer to communicate face to face and if I got the chance I always choose to meet in person because it's more valuable rather than just chat online or something.

✓ I think I'm a strange person in this civilization because despite the large number of people, I prefer to communicate face to face and if I get the chance I always choose to meet in person because it's more valuable than just chatting online or something.

'Civilizations' should be singular 'civilization'. 'Besides' is incorrect here; 'despite' is the correct preposition. 'If I got the chance' should be 'if I get the chance' to match present tense. 'Rather than just chat' should be 'more valuable than just chatting' for correct comparison and gerund use.

× Yes, especially when I was small, because when we are small we don't know what to do or what's right or wrong is the problems of the behaviors.

✓ Yes, especially when I was small, because when we were small we didn't know what to do or what was right or wrong; those were the problems with our behavior.

Tense inconsistency: 'we are small' should be past tense 'we were small'. 'Don't know' should be 'didn't know'. 'What's right or wrong is the problems of the behaviors' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× But now is last obviously, because I'm grow up a little bit more and more other.

✓ But now it is different, obviously, because I've grown up a little bit more and more.

'Now is last obviously' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'now it is different, obviously' is clearer. 'I'm grow up' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I've grown up' is correct to indicate change over time. 'And more other' is unclear and omitted.