聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. Also, organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your opinion with specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it's an easy way to stay connected. However, sometimes it can be a bit annoying if it goes on for too long.

建議: Focus on giving a clear and structured answer with specific examples. Avoid filler words like 'like' and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: We usually chat about our daily activities, plans to meet up, or any special events that happen. For instance, we often discuss where to go for a gathering or share exciting news.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Use linking words to connect your reasons and provide a concise explanation.

範例: Since I am an introvert, I prefer chatting one-on-one because I value privacy. Also, I feel more comfortable having personal conversations rather than group chats.

建議: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and avoid informal phrases like 'you know'.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more effective. In person, it's easier to understand emotions and avoid misunderstandings that can happen in online chats.

建議: Make your answer more natural by using smoother expressions and clearer sentence structure. Provide a brief explanation with linking words to support your opinion.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I prefer to resolve conflicts calmly. However, if necessary, I do express my anger to address important issues.

× Yeah, actually I like, I like checking chatting with my friends because I think it's kind of nowadays we always have to chat with each other and communicate with each other by chatting.

✓ Yeah, actually I like chatting with my friends because I think nowadays we always have to chat with each other and communicate with each other by chatting.

The phrase 'checking chatting' is incorrect because 'checking' is unnecessary and disrupts the verb + -ing form. The correct form is simply 'like chatting' to express enjoyment of the activity.

× And this is really helpful, but after a while it's kinda irritates me.

✓ And this is really helpful, but after a while it kind of irritates me.

The phrase 'kinda irritates me' is informal and 'kinda' should be 'kind of' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'it's kinda irritates me' is incorrect because 'it's' (it is) followed by a verb in present tense is redundant; it should be 'it kind of irritates me.'

× We usually talk about like what we are doing and when we want to go or if we have any like meeting where should we go or something like this or maybe something very special happen.

✓ We usually talk about what we are doing, when we want to go somewhere, if we have any meetings, where we should go, or maybe if something very special happens.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Also, 'something very special happen' should be 'something very special happens' to agree in tense and subject-verb agreement.

× We tell tell them each tell each other directly.

✓ We tell each other directly.

The phrase 'We tell tell them each tell each other directly' is redundant and confusing. The correct pronoun usage is 'We tell each other directly' to indicate mutual communication.

× As I'm an extra an introvert person, I prefer to chat directly with one person I think is better and kinda I love the privacy so I'm not really comfortable with chatting in the group with the people I prefer to do, you know, speak separately.

✓ As I'm an introvert, I prefer to chat directly with one person because I think it is better. I kind of love the privacy, so I'm not really comfortable chatting in a group; I prefer to speak separately.

The original sentence has redundant words ('extra an introvert'), incorrect conjunctions, and awkward phrasing. 'Extra an introvert' should be 'an introvert.' Also, 'I prefer to do, you know, speak separately' is unclear and should be simplified.

× I prefer to communication, communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face.

'Prefer to communication' is incorrect because 'communication' is a noun; the verb form 'communicate' should be used after 'prefer to.'

× I think it's gonna be more effective.

✓ I think it is going to be more effective.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'it's' is acceptable but expanding to 'it is' is clearer.

× And the influence of your chatting when you are in person is much higher than when you are chatting.

✓ And the impact of your chatting when you are in person is much greater than when you are chatting online.

'Influence of your chatting' is awkward; 'impact' is more appropriate. Also, 'when you are chatting' is vague; specifying 'chatting online' clarifies the comparison.

× You know, in chatting you might understand something wrong.

✓ You know, when chatting, you might misunderstand something.

'In chatting' is incorrect preposition usage; 'when chatting' is correct. Also, 'understand something wrong' should be 'misunderstand something' to convey the intended meaning.

× I'm not kind of that person.

✓ I'm not that kind of person.

The phrase 'I'm not kind of that person' is incorrect word order. The correct phrase is 'I'm not that kind of person.'

× I usually don't argue with someone, especially with my friends, and always try to solve anything really calmly and be in peace.

✓ I usually don't argue with anyone, especially my friends, and always try to solve things calmly and peacefully.

'Argue with someone' is less natural than 'argue with anyone' in negative sentences. Also, 'solve anything really calmly and be in peace' is awkward; 'solve things calmly and peacefully' is clearer and grammatically correct.