聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid grammatical errors like 'like to chatting' and use correct forms such as 'like chatting'. Also, avoid redundancy and filler words like 'uh'. Make your answer more natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I need help. It's a convenient way to stay connected and share information.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases like 'chat with my friends' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the topics. Also, reduce filler words and make the answer more fluent.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities and sometimes we share gossip. This helps me feel comfortable and strengthens our communication.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'who are has a lot of people' is incorrect. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid incomplete thoughts.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can share my feelings and learn new things from different members, which makes the conversation more interesting.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use correct expressions like 'face-to-face' and 'body language'. Also, explain your preference clearly with linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer both methods, but especially face-to-face communication because I can see people's expressions and body language, which helps me understand their intentions better.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. For example, say 'I quite often argue with my friends' and avoid repetition like 'it's it's'. Use linking words to explain the positive outcome of arguments clearly.

範例: Yes, I quite often argue with my friends, but it doesn't affect our relationship. We discuss our differences calmly, which helps us find solutions and understand each other better.

× Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends whenever I need any kind of, uh, help.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends whenever I need any kind of, uh, help.

The verb 'like' is followed by either the infinitive form 'to chat' or the gerund form 'chatting'. Using 'to chatting' is incorrect. Here, 'like chatting' is the correct form.

× That time I prefer to chat with him and uh, it's really convenient way to communicate with my friends.

✓ At that time, I prefer to chat with him and, uh, it's a really convenient way to communicate with my friends.

The phrase 'That time' should be 'At that time' to indicate a specific moment. Also, 'it's really convenient way' lacks the article 'a' before 'really convenient way' because 'way' is singular countable noun.

× Normally I chat with my friends, uh, about our regular activities. Uh, most of the time I prefer to chat with my friends for gossiping.

✓ Normally I chat with my friends, uh, about our regular activities. Uh, most of the time I prefer chatting with my friends for gossiping.

After 'prefer', when expressing general preference, the gerund form 'chatting' is used instead of the infinitive 'to chat'. Here, 'prefer chatting' is correct.

× And when I chat with my friends that time I feel like more comfortable and uh, it is really good way to communicate with my friends.

✓ And when I chat with my friends, at that time I feel more comfortable and, uh, it is a really good way to communicate with my friends.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time' to indicate a specific moment. Also, 'really good way' needs the article 'a' before 'really good way' because 'way' is a singular countable noun.

× To be honest, I like to chat with a group of people who are has a lot of people and if I communicate with group of people the time I can share my feelings and after that I can gather some knowledge from this group member.

✓ To be honest, I like to chat with a group of people who have a lot of people, and if I communicate with a group of people at that time, I can share my feelings and after that I can gather some knowledge from these group members.

The relative clause 'who are has' is incorrect; it should be 'who have' because 'people' is plural. Also, 'group of people the time' should be 'group of people at that time'. 'Group member' should be plural 'group members' to match 'these'.

× So it's really good way to.

✓ So it's a really good way to do so.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or verb after 'to'. Adding 'do so' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I prefer both and both is really helpful for people, but uh, I especially prefer face to face.

✓ I prefer both, and both are really helpful for people, but, uh, I especially prefer face-to-face communication.

'Both is' should be 'both are' because 'both' refers to two things and takes plural verb. Also, 'face to face' as an adjective should be hyphenated 'face-to-face'. Adding 'communication' clarifies the meaning.

× Or I can easily uh, see in front of people expression and uh, body languages.

✓ Also, I can easily see people's expressions and body language in front of me.

'See in front of people expression' is incorrect; it should be 'see people's expressions'. 'Body languages' is incorrect because 'body language' is uncountable and singular. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× As a result, I can easily catch up their intention or their uh.

✓ As a result, I can easily catch their intention or their meaning.

The phrase 'catch up their intention' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'catch their intention'. The sentence is completed with 'meaning' to clarify the thought.

× Yes, it's a quite often I argue with my friends, but it's it's not impact on our relationship.

✓ Yes, I quite often argue with my friends, but it doesn't impact our relationship.

'It's a quite often' is incorrect; 'I quite often' is correct. 'It's not impact' should be 'it doesn't impact' to use the correct negative modal verb form.

× We always maintain our relationship and when we argue with some concept at that time we we can discuss regarding this statement.

✓ We always maintain our relationship, and when we argue about some concept, we can discuss this statement.

The phrase 'argue with some concept' should be 'argue about some concept'. 'Discuss regarding' is redundant; 'discuss' alone is sufficient. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× As a result we can get solution from this discussion.

✓ As a result, we can get a solution from this discussion.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'solution' because 'solution' is a singular countable noun. Adding a comma after 'As a result' improves readability.