聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторений и излишних деталей, используйте связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often ask about their health and daily activities, and sometimes we just share gossip to relax.

建議: Старайтесь использовать более точные выражения и избегать повторов. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: I usually chat about studying because we are preparing for exams. For example, we practice subjects like world history and English, and sometimes discuss topics like the environment and ecology.

建議: Используйте правильные грамматические формы и более естественные выражения. Добавьте связующие слова для улучшения связности.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more confident and comfortable. When I talk in a group, I often feel nervous since I'm not used to it.

建議: Сделайте ответ более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

範例: That's an interesting question. I mostly prefer communicating via social media because I don't have to show my face or voice; just texting makes me feel more confident.

建議: Избегайте слов-паразитов и улучшите грамматику. Сделайте ответ более связным с помощью подходящих связующих слов.

範例: Yes, I do argue with my friends, especially with one friend who likes to argue. However, our arguments are usually lighthearted and just for fun when we disagree.

× I frequently chatting with them and I am asking about their health and what they do, what they don't and something else like that and we are just gossips sometimes.

✓ I frequently chat with them and ask about their health, what they do, what they don't, and other things like that, and we just gossip sometimes.

The verb 'chatting' should be in the base form 'chat' after 'I frequently' to indicate habitual action. Similarly, 'I am asking' should be 'I ask' to match the present simple tense used for regular activities. 'We are just gossips' is incorrect; 'gossip' is a verb here, so 'we just gossip' is correct.

× I usually chat about studying because we are gonna prepare for exam and we are now practice some some subjects like world history or English and about different topics like environments, ecology, like something else.

✓ I usually chat about studying because we are going to prepare for exams and we are now practicing some subjects like world history or English and different topics like the environment, ecology, and other things.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. 'Prepare for exam' should be 'prepare for exams' (plural). 'We are now practice' should be 'we are now practicing' to use the correct present continuous form. 'Environments' should be singular 'environment' when referring to the general concept.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chatting with a group of people I feel myself not confidence and uncomfortable because I don't used to chatting with people group of people and I just chat only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people, I don't feel confident and comfortable because I am not used to chatting with groups of people, so I just chat with one friend.

'When I chatting' should be 'when I chat' to use the base verb after 'when'. 'I feel myself not confidence' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't feel confident'. 'I don't used to chatting' should be 'I am not used to chatting' to express habit. 'Group of people' should be pluralized as 'groups of people'.

× Interesting question, I think I mostly prefer to communicate with social media because you don't need to show your face, your voice, just texting and I feel myself more confident when I talk and in the social media.

✓ Interesting question. I think I mostly prefer to communicate via social media because you don't need to show your face or your voice, just text, and I feel more confident when I talk on social media.

The correct preposition is 'via' social media, not 'with'. 'Just texting' should be 'just text' to use the verb form. 'I feel myself more confident' should be 'I feel more confident'. 'When I talk and in the social media' is awkward; it should be 'when I talk on social media'.

× Yes, I argue with my friends, uh, specifically with my one friend who love argue with someone. But we argue like not seriously just for laughing or when uh, when we not accept our opinion.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends, specifically with one friend who loves to argue with others. But we argue not seriously, just for fun or when we don't accept each other's opinions.

'My one friend' should be 'one friend'. 'Who love argue' should be 'who loves to argue' to use third person singular and correct verb form. 'Just for laughing' should be 'just for fun'. 'When we not accept' should be 'when we don't accept'. 'Our opinion' should be 'each other's opinions' to indicate mutual disagreement.