聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤較多，建議用更簡潔且正確的句子表達，避免重複並加強連貫性。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. We often talk on Discord about funny things and share our daily experiences.

建議: 回答內容有點模糊且語法不流暢，建議用更清楚的句子描述聊天內容，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: We usually chat about our daily lives, such as what happened at work or funny things my friends did, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

建議: 回答基本清楚，但用詞和語法可更自然，建議使用更正式的連接詞和正確的複數形式。

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can receive different opinions and learn various perspectives, rather than hearing just one view.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和不自然的表達，建議簡化句子並使用正確的時態和詞彙。

範例: I prefer communicating through social media because it's easier to share many things. However, I feel a bit embarrassed when talking face-to-face, but I'm trying to improve.

建議: 回答語法錯誤多且不流暢，建議用簡單明確的句子表達，並注意主詞動詞一致和句子結構。

範例: Yes, I often argue with my friends when we have different opinions. Sometimes we discuss to reach the right conclusion, which helps us understand each other better.

× I there is very in a high frequency I think.

✓ I chat very frequently, I think.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there is' without a proper subject and object, causing confusion. The phrase 'very in a high frequency' is ungrammatical. The correction uses a clear subject and verb to express frequency properly.

× Me and my friends always chatting in the discord like DC.

✓ My friends and I are always chatting on Discord, like DC.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'are' before 'chatting', which is necessary for the present continuous tense. Also, 'Me and my friends' should be 'My friends and I' for correct subject pronoun usage.

× We talk about many funny things our life and share everything.

✓ We talk about many funny things in our lives and share everything.

The phrase 'funny things our life' is missing the preposition 'in' and 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'we'. Adding 'in' and pluralizing 'life' corrects the sentence.

× Mostly our life like what we've been experienced today while we see what we happen on that day.

✓ Mostly about our lives, like what we've experienced today and what happened that day.

The phrase 'we've been experienced' is incorrect; 'experienced' should be used without 'been'. Also, 'we see what we happen' is ungrammatical; it should be 'what happened'. The correction simplifies and corrects tense usage.

× For example, well I usually talk to my friend about what I saw when I worked that day or like my other friends doing something stupid and we make fun of.

✓ For example, I usually talk to my friends about what I saw when I worked that day or about my other friends doing something stupid, and we make fun of them.

The original sentence mixes tenses and lacks prepositions. 'Doing' should be preceded by 'about', and 'make fun of' needs an object. The correction clarifies these points and maintains consistent tense.

× I think I prefer to chat with a group of people 'cause I can have a lot of different feedbacks from every friends instead of only one opinion.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can get a lot of different feedback from every friend instead of only one opinion.

'Feedback' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'feedbacks'. Also, 'every friends' is incorrect; it should be 'every friend' (singular). The correction fixes these pluralization errors.

× I can learn a lot of different views from them, not exactly only one.

✓ I can learn a lot of different views from them, not just one.

The phrase 'not exactly only one' is awkward and unidiomatic. Replacing it with 'not just one' is clearer and more natural.

× Well I think I more prefer to communicate by social media cause umm by message we can share a lot of thing but when I'm face to face to talk about things I get some embarrassed and not so comfortable.

✓ Well, I think I prefer to communicate more by social media because through messages we can share a lot of things, but when I'm face to face talking about things, I get a bit embarrassed and uncomfortable.

The original sentence misuses 'more prefer' (should be 'prefer more' or just 'prefer'), lacks articles ('a lot of thing' should be 'a lot of things'), and uses 'some embarrassed' incorrectly (should be 'a bit embarrassed'). The correction addresses these modal and article issues.

× But I'm trying to training myself to get better.

✓ But I'm trying to train myself to get better.

After 'trying to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the gerund. 'Trying to training' is incorrect; it should be 'trying to train'.

× Should I argue?

✓ Do I argue?

'Should I argue?' is a question about obligation or advice, which is inappropriate here. The student likely means to ask or state frequency, so 'Do I argue?' or 'I often argue' is more suitable.

× I am very often argue with my friends when we have different opinion in something.

✓ I very often argue with my friends when we have different opinions about something.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'argue'; the simple present tense 'I argue' is correct. Also, 'different opinion' should be plural 'opinions', and 'in something' should be 'about something'.

× In some case we will discuss it and we will sometimes find each other just to get a right conclusion.

✓ In some cases, we discuss it and sometimes meet to reach the right conclusion.

The original sentence has awkward structure and tense inconsistency. 'In some case' should be plural 'cases', and 'find each other just to get a right conclusion' is unnatural; 'meet to reach the right conclusion' is clearer.

× We think that make each of us understand the truth less thing.

✓ We think that helps each of us understand the truth better.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Make' should be 'helps', and 'less thing' is incorrect; 'better' is appropriate to express improvement in understanding.