聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating words and make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, you can say, "Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share about our daily lives."

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share about our daily lives.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but is a bit long and has some redundancy. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid filler words like "uh". For example, "I usually chat about our daily lives and weekend activities because it's a good way to catch up and know what everyone is doing."

範例: I usually chat about our daily lives and weekend activities because it's a good way to catch up and know what everyone is doing.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but the second sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. For example, "I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations."

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. For example, "I prefer social media for casual chats; however, for serious topics, I choose face-to-face communication because it is more meaningful."

範例: I prefer social media for casual chats; however, for serious topics, I choose face-to-face communication because it is more meaningful.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and complete your thoughts. For example, "No, I usually don't argue with my friends because we always agree on decisions. I prefer to avoid conflicts to maintain good relationships."

範例: No, I usually don't argue with my friends because we always agree on decisions. I prefer to avoid conflicts to maintain good relationships.

× Through chatting I can we can talk about our daily lives.

✓ Through chatting, we can talk about our daily lives.

The original sentence has redundant subjects 'I can we can' which causes confusion and incorrect sentence structure. The corrected sentence removes the redundancy and clarifies the meaning by using 'we can'. Adding a comma after 'chatting' improves readability.

× our everyday things we shared with each other and I think it's a nice way to catch up things and know everyone's daily activities.

✓ our everyday things we share with each other, and I think it's a nice way to catch up on things and know everyone's daily activities.

The original sentence mixes past tense 'shared' with present context and misses the preposition 'on' after 'catch up'. Changing 'shared' to 'share' aligns with the present tense context. Adding 'on' after 'catch up' is necessary for correct idiomatic usage.

× If we talk with only if when I was share with share things with only one friend, the conversation can be more deeper than.

✓ If I share things with only one friend, the conversation can be deeper.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant and incorrect phrases like 'only if when I was share with share'. Simplifying the sentence to 'If I share things with only one friend' corrects the structure. Also, 'more deeper' is incorrect; 'deeper' alone suffices as 'deeper' is already comparative.

× I always like to avoid any for any further conflict, that's why I always I try to keep.

✓ I always like to avoid any further conflict; that's why I always try to keep peace.

The phrase 'avoid any for any further conflict' is incorrect; 'for' is unnecessary. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear at the end. Adding 'peace' completes the thought. Using a semicolon improves sentence flow.