聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và chia động từ phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time because it helps me relax and relieve stress after work or study.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "Let me seize" và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about daily life topics, such as school, family, or hobbies, because these subjects are easy and interesting to discuss.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to have a comfortable and open conversation than in a group.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am shy and find it easier to chat with friends online than face-to-face.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn có hay không hay cách bạn giải quyết tranh luận với bạn bè.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually understand each other's opinions and solve problems calmly.

× Actually, I enjoy chatting with my friend when I have a spare time, I easily chat with my friends and I consider when I chat with my friends I can relax my stress after working and after studying.

✓ Actually, I enjoy chatting with my friends when I have spare time. I easily chat with my friends and I consider that when I chat with my friends, I can relieve my stress after working and studying.

The phrase 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. 'A spare time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable here, so 'spare time' without 'a' is correct. Also, 'relax my stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve my stress'. Splitting the sentence improves clarity.

× Let me seize, I usually chat with my friend uh, about their topic related to daily life, about school or your family. So it's either normal topic and eyes and my friends can easy to talk.

✓ Let me see, I usually chat with my friends about topics related to daily life, about school or family. So these are normal topics and my friends can easily talk about them.

'Seize' is a wrong word; it should be 'see'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'their topic'. 'Their topic' is better as 'topics'. 'Your family' should be 'family' to keep consistent pronouns. 'Either normal topic and eyes' is unclear and corrected to 'these are normal topics'. 'Can easy to talk' should be 'can easily talk'.

× Well, as mummies I like to chat with only one friend more than in their group. Because when I chat with one friend I can easy to talk anything. Anyways to about topic and about group it I cannot easy to talk.

✓ Well, as a person, I like to chat with only one friend more than with a group. Because when I chat with one friend, I can easily talk about anything. Anyway, about topics and groups, I cannot easily talk.

'Mummies' is incorrect; likely meant 'a person'. 'In their group' should be 'with a group'. 'Can easy to talk' should be 'can easily talk'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Because when I chat with one friend I can easy to talk anything.

✓ Because when I chat with one friend, I can easily talk about anything.

'Can' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. 'Easy' is an adjective; the adverb 'easily' is correct here.

× Anyways to about topic and about group it I cannot easy to talk.

✓ Anyway, about topics and groups, I cannot easily talk.

'To about' is incorrect; 'about' alone is sufficient. 'Easy to talk' should be 'easily talk'.

× I usually chat with my friend uh, about their topic related to daily life, about school or your family.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about topics related to daily life, about school or family.

'My friend' and 'their topic' mismatch in number and possessive pronouns. 'Your family' is inconsistent with 'my friends'; 'family' is better without possessive pronoun here.

× So it's either normal topic and eyes and my friends can easy to talk.

✓ So these are normal topics and my friends can easily talk about them.

'Either' is misused; 'these are' is correct. 'Easy' should be the adverb 'easily'. 'Eyes' is irrelevant and removed.

× Well, as mummies I like to chat with only one friend more than in their group.

✓ Well, as a person, I like to chat with only one friend more than with a group.

'Mummies' is incorrect pronoun; 'a person' fits better. 'In their group' should be 'with a group'.

× So I choose uh, communicate by social media as to easy to chat with my friends or someone.

✓ So I choose to communicate by social media because it is easy to chat with my friends or someone.

'To easy to chat' is incorrect; 'easy' is adjective and needs 'it is' before. Also, 'communicate by social media' needs 'to' before 'communicate'. Sentence structure improved.

× Uh, to be honest, I agree with my friends a lot because I and my friend have a some things, uh, figures so I can easy to umm sew this problem.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I agree with my friends a lot because my friends and I have some things in common, so I can easily solve this problem.

'I and my friend' should be 'my friends and I' for correct order and plural. 'A some things' is incorrect; 'some things' is correct. 'Easy to umm sew' should be 'easily solve'.