聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and detailed. Instead of saying 'reduces my thoughts of being bored', you can say 'it helps me feel less bored and more connected with my friends'. Also, add a linking phrase to make your answer smoother.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me feel less bored and more connected with them. For example, we often share stories and laugh together, which makes me happy.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. Instead of 'like mini trips and sudden plans', say 'such as mini trips and spontaneous outings'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'spend over more time together'.

範例: We usually talk about our future plans, such as mini trips and spontaneous outings. For instance, we often decide to go out for food to spend more quality time together.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one friend because I understand how they react to my mood and way of talking better than a group would.'

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I know how they react to my mood and the way I talk. This makes our conversations more comfortable and enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Instead of 'shows my mood how I will react on the other side of my friend', say 'allows me to express my feelings and read my friend's reactions better'.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express my feelings clearly and understand my friend's reactions better.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to say 'Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because I want to spend special time with them, like going to parties or choosing food, but they have different preferences.'

範例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because I want to spend special time with them, such as going to parties or choosing food, but they prefer different things.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it reduces my thoughts of being bored.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it reduces my feeling of boredom.

The phrase 'thoughts of being bored' is awkward and unidiomatic. It is better to say 'feeling of boredom' to express the state of being bored clearly and naturally.

× We actually talk more about our future plans, for example going somewhere like mini trips and sudden plans, outings and getting some food to spend over more time together.

✓ We actually talk more about our future plans, for example going somewhere like mini trips, sudden plans, outings, and getting some food to spend more time together.

The phrase 'spend over more time together' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'more time together' without 'over'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list for clarity.

× I'm going through only one of my friend because I know how he how he or she reacts on my talkative mood and how they respond on my way of talking.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one of my friends because I know how he or she reacts to my talkative mood and how they respond to my way of talking.

The phrase 'I'm going through only one of my friend' is incorrect and unclear. 'Prefer to talk with only one of my friends' is correct. Also, 'reacts on' and 'respond on' should be 'reacts to' and 'respond to' respectively. Pronoun agreement is corrected by using 'he or she' and 'they' appropriately.

× I know they are very understand understandable than me.

✓ I know they are more understanding than me.

The word 'understand' is a verb and 'understandable' is an adjective meaning 'able to be understood'. The correct adjective to describe a person who understands others is 'understanding'. Also, comparative form 'more understanding' is used to compare.

× I'd prefer face to face communication more because it helps me to express my feelings and shows my mood how I will react on the other side of my friend.

✓ I'd prefer face-to-face communication more because it helps me express my feelings and shows my mood and how I will react to the other side of my friend.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. The phrase 'react on the other side of my friend' is unclear; 'react to the other side of my friend' is better, but ideally it should be 'react to my friend's reactions'. Also, 'helps me to express' can be simplified to 'helps me express'. Added 'and' to connect ideas properly.

× Yes I do, because sometimes I want some special time of my friends to going to like some parties and to prefer foods, but they don't.

✓ Yes, I do, because sometimes I want some special time with my friends to go to parties and choose foods, but they don't.

The phrase 'to going to like some parties' is incorrect; it should be 'to go to parties'. Also, 'to prefer foods' is awkward; 'choose foods' or 'decide on foods' is better. 'Some special time of my friends' should be 'some special time with my friends'. Added commas for clarity.