聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Make your answer more natural by completing your thoughts clearly and using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and ideas. We often discuss interesting topics such as football and cricket, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

建議: Reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific details to make your answer clearer.

範例: Since we are students, we usually chat about our studies. Additionally, we discuss sports like football and cricket, as well as political situations and the current circumstances in our country.

建議: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Try to express your preferences more clearly and naturally.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because I can hear many opinions on a topic. Moreover, we share experiences and enjoy quality time together, which makes the conversation more fun.

建議: Avoid excessive filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to contrast ideas and express your opinion clearly and naturally.

範例: Most of the time, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand honest opinions. However, if I don't have time to meet my friends, I contact them through social media or FaceTime.

建議: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific examples to make your answer clearer.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we debate about sports. For example, I am a Madrid fan while he supports Barca, so we discuss which team is better. Also, we compare football and cricket, debating which sport is healthier.

× Also sometimes we talk about some interesting topics, football, cricket, it's.

✓ Also, sometimes we talk about some interesting topics, like football and cricket.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' at the end, which is unnecessary and confusing. Also, the list of topics should be introduced with 'like' to clarify that football and cricket are examples of interesting topics. Adding a comma after 'Also' improves readability.

× Usually we are students, uh, that's why we chat about our study and sometimes, uh, we talk about our, uh, sports, football, cricket, also political situations and uh, the, our country's circumstance.

✓ Usually, we are students, so we chat about our studies and sometimes we talk about sports like football and cricket, also political situations and our country's circumstances.

The phrase 'our study' should be pluralized to 'our studies' to refer to academic subjects generally. The list of sports should be introduced with 'like' for clarity. 'The, our country's circumstance' is redundant; 'our country's circumstances' suffices. Commas are added for better flow.

× I prefer to chat with my friends group because I can know about many people's opinion about this topic rather than the one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with my group of friends because I can learn about many people's opinions on this topic rather than just one friend.

'Friends group' should be 'group of friends' for correct noun phrase. 'People's opinion' should be plural 'people's opinions' because it refers to multiple individuals' views. 'Know about' is better replaced with 'learn about' for natural expression.

× Then also we can share something a lot of friends and have some good time spend our quality time while laughing.

✓ Also, we can share things with many friends and have a good time spending our quality time while laughing.

The phrase 'share something a lot of friends' is incorrect; it should be 'share things with many friends'. 'Have some good time spend our quality time' is awkward; better phrased as 'have a good time spending our quality time'. Commas improve clarity.

× Uh, most of the time I prefer face to face communication because, uh, it's the way we can know about their opinion that are honest.

✓ Most of the time, I prefer face-to-face communication because it's the way we can know their honest opinions.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Know about their opinion that are honest' is incorrect; it should be 'know their honest opinions' to correctly express possession and plurality. Commas improve readability.

× Uh, because sometimes they can lie in any types of social media and, but if the situation is I don't have any time to meet my friend, I just contact with them through social media or my FaceTime.

✓ Sometimes, people can lie on various types of social media, but if I don't have time to meet my friends, I just contact them through social media or FaceTime.

'They' is vague; 'people' is clearer. 'Lie in any types' should be 'lie on various types' because 'lie on' is the correct preposition for platforms. 'Contact with them' should be 'contact them' as 'contact' is a transitive verb. 'My FaceTime' is better as just 'FaceTime'. Plural 'friends' fits better here.

× Yeah, I sometimes argue with my friends, uh, like, uh, when we are debating about something like I'm a Madrid fan, he's a Barca fan.

✓ Yeah, I sometimes argue with my friends, like when we are debating about something, for example, I'm a Madrid fan and he's a Barca fan.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'like' repetitively. Adding 'for example' clarifies the example. 'Like' before 'when' is unnecessary. Commas improve sentence flow.

× We argue about our situation.

✓ We argue about our opinions.

'Our situation' is vague and unclear in this context. 'Our opinions' better expresses the idea of differing views causing arguments.

× Also, I'm a football fan, he is a cricket fan. We argue about our, our playing style, which one is best, which one is, uh, good for our health.

✓ Also, I'm a football fan and he is a cricket fan. We argue about our playing styles, which one is best, and which one is good for our health.

'Our, our playing style' is repetitive; one 'our' suffices. 'Playing style' should be plural 'playing styles' because two different styles are compared. Adding 'and' improves sentence structure.