聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I cannot meet them everyday so I chat with them whenever I miss them"; instead, combine ideas smoothly using linking words. Also, try to use varied vocabulary such as "keep in touch" instead of "chat" repeatedly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially those who live far away. Since I can't meet them often, I keep in touch through messages whenever I miss them.

建議: Your answer covers the topic well, but to improve, try to organise your points with linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to make it more coherent. Also, avoid vague terms like 'something urgent'; be more specific to enrich your answer.

範例: I usually chat about my daily activities, important news, or sometimes gossip about our school friends. For example, I might share exciting events or discuss plans to stay connected and maintain our friendship.

建議: Your answer is understandable but sounds a bit unnatural and repetitive. Avoid phrases like 'I don't believe in groups' which may sound negative. Instead, explain your preference positively and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I usually prefer chatting with just one close friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal things. For instance, I have a best friend with whom I share everything.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, say 'face-to-face communication' and 'we can understand their emotions better'. Also, avoid repeating 'face to face' too often.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to see each other's expressions and understand emotions better. Moreover, it helps me learn the slang they use, which is harder through social media.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Also, explain briefly how you resolve arguments to enrich your answer.

範例: Sometimes I argue with my friends when our opinions differ, but we usually manage to reach a conclusion together by discussing calmly.

× I love chatting with my friends especially with my long distance friends because I cannot meet them everyday so I chat with them whenever I miss them.

✓ I love chatting with my friends, especially my long-distance friends, because I cannot meet them every day, so I chat with them whenever I miss them.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace', but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' (meaning 'each day') is correct. Also, 'long distance friends' should be hyphenated as 'long-distance friends' to correctly form a compound adjective. Adding commas improves clarity.

× I usually chat about my day-to-day life or something urgent that I have to tell them, or some gossip about our school friends so we can stay connected and maintain our friendship.

✓ I usually chat about my day-to-day life or something urgent that I have to tell them, or some gossip about our school friends, so we can stay connected and maintain our friendship.

A comma is needed before 'so' when it introduces a result clause. This improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× I usually prefer to chat with only one friend of mine because I don't believe in groups.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with only one friend of mine because I don't believe in groups.

No correction needed here as the preposition usage is correct.

× I just have one best friend of mine with her.

✓ I just have one best friend, and she is mine.

The phrase 'one best friend of mine with her' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'one best friend, and she is mine' to correctly express possession and clarity.

× I share everything.

✓ I share everything with her.

Adding 'with her' clarifies the object of sharing, improving sentence completeness and clarity.

× I prefer communication by face to face because we can see each others expressions and we can get to know about the slang in which they are talking.

✓ I prefer communication face to face because we can see each other's expressions and we can get to know the slang they are using.

The phrase 'communication by face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communication face to face'. 'Each others' should be 'each other's' to show possession. 'Get to know about the slang in which they are talking' is awkward; better is 'get to know the slang they are using'.

× If they're sad or angry, I believe it is best to talk face to face.

✓ If they're sad or angry, I believe it is best to talk face to face.

No correction needed; pronoun usage is correct.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends in the things that are thoughts doesn't match, but we like manage to make a conclusion together and.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends when our thoughts don't match, but we usually manage to reach a conclusion together.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'in the things that are thoughts doesn't match' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'when our thoughts don't match'. 'We like manage' is incorrect; it should be 'we usually manage'. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper ending.