聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が多いです。例えば、「I usually chatting friends and face to face and their social media」は不自然で、「I usually chat with friends face-to-face and on social media」と言い換えると良いでしょう。また、文を短くし、明確な主語と動詞を使うことが重要です。

範例: Yes, I like chatting with friends. I usually chat with them face-to-face or on social media. We talk every day, and it helps me feel relaxed.

建議: 回答は内容が具体的ですが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現が多いです。例えば、「for example」を繰り返すのは避け、「I usually chat about daily life, such as what I ate yesterday for lunch and dinner, and what I studied」など簡潔に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually chat about daily life, such as what I ate yesterday for lunch and dinner, and what I studied.

建議: 回答は明確で理由も述べられていますが、文が少し長く感じられます。接続詞を使って文を分けるとより自然です。例えば、「I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can communicate with many people. This helps me improve my speaking skills and make new friends.」のようにすると良いでしょう。

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can communicate with many people. This helps me improve my speaking skills and make new friends.

建議: 回答は理由を述べていますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「I can checked personal expression」は「I can check personal expressions」に修正し、「because it allows me to express my feelings directly and observe personal expressions」などとすると自然です。

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express my feelings directly and observe personal expressions.

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現が多いです。「I have not experienced argue with my friends」は「I have not experienced arguing with my friends」に修正し、「It is my party」は意味が不明瞭なので削除しましょう。より自然な回答は「No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I dislike conflicts and have never had an argument with them.」です。

範例: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I dislike conflicts and have never had an argument with them.

× Yes I like chatting with friends umm I usually chatting friends and face to face and their social media and we talked umm every day it's makes me relaxed by chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends. Umm, I usually chat with friends face to face and on their social media, and we talk every day. It makes me relaxed to chat with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'chatting' instead of the base verb 'chat' after 'usually'. The verb after 'usually' should be in the base form to indicate habitual action. Also, 'it's makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'. Additionally, 'talked' should be 'talk' to match the present tense habitual action. The sentence was also fragmented and needed punctuation for clarity.

× Yes I like chatting with friends umm I usually chatting friends and face to face and their social media and we talked umm every day it's makes me relaxed by chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends. Umm, I usually chat with friends face to face and on their social media, and we talk every day. It makes me relaxed to chat with my friends.

The verb 'talked' is in the past tense, but the context indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'talk' is appropriate.

× Yes I like chatting with friends umm I usually chatting friends and face to face and their social media and we talked umm every day it's makes me relaxed by chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends. Umm, I usually chat with friends face to face and on their social media, and we talk every day. It makes me relaxed to chat with my friends.

The phrase 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to agree with the earlier plural 'friends' and the context of chatting with multiple people.

× Uh, I usually chat about umm, the daily life and for example, uh, what I ate, uh, yesterday, umm, for lunch, dinner and what I studied, for example.

✓ Uh, I usually chat about daily life, for example, what I ate yesterday for lunch and dinner, and what I studied.

The phrase 'the daily life' is incorrect; 'daily life' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and redundant with 'for example' used twice; it was streamlined for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because in a group I can communicate with many people so I can enhance my speaking skills and make new friends.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because in a group I can communicate with many people, so I can enhance my speaking skills and make new friends.

The original sentence is mostly correct but needed a comma before 'so' to separate independent clauses properly.

× I prefer to communicate face to face, umm, because umm, it can uh, express my feelings directly to other person and I can checked uh, personal expression.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it can express my feelings directly to the other person, and I can check personal expressions.

The phrase 'to other person' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'can checked' is incorrect; it should be 'can check' as modal verbs are followed by the base form of the verb.

× I prefer to communicate face to face, umm, because umm, it can uh, express my feelings directly to other person and I can checked uh, personal expression.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it can express my feelings directly to the other person, and I can check personal expressions.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'checked' should be 'check'.

× No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I hate arguing with friends so I have not experienced argue with my friends.

✓ No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I hate arguing with friends, so I have not experienced arguing with my friends.

The verb 'argue' after 'experienced' should be in the gerund form 'arguing' to function as a noun object.

× No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I hate arguing with friends so I have not experienced argue with my friends. It is my party.

✓ No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I hate arguing with friends, so I have not experienced arguing with my friends. That is my point.

The phrase 'It is my party' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intended to say 'That is my point' to conclude the statement logically.