聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'chat' instead of 'jet'. Keep your sentences clear and concise, and complete your thoughts fully.

範例: Yes, absolutely. I often chat with my friends through messaging apps. We usually discuss tasks we need to complete and share interesting details about our daily routines. I think chatting is a great way to stay connected.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about studying. For example, we discuss our assignments and plans for the next day. We also talk about our daily routines and share interesting experiences.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and avoid filler words. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I prefer to chat with one friend, usually my best friend, because it is simpler and I can share my thoughts comfortably. One-on-one conversations feel more personal and meaningful to me.

建議: Try to speak more fluently without hesitation. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons and be specific about how face-to-face communication helps relationships.

範例: Actually, I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me and my friends stay connected better. We can share stories and see each other's reactions, which makes our relationships stronger.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain how you resolve arguments using linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'. Be specific about the process.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I have disagreements when we have different opinions. However, we solve these problems by sharing our ideas and listening to each other carefully.

× I often jet with my friends through, uh messages app umm, I, we often talk about the, the task that we need to complete and some uh, interesting daily routine uh, and I think chatting is uh, one of my.

✓ I often chat with my friends through, uh, messaging apps. Umm, we often talk about the tasks that we need to complete and some, uh, interesting daily routines. Uh, and I think chatting is, uh, one of my favorites.

The verb 'jet' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chat' and when referring to the action, the '-ing' form 'messaging' is used to describe the app type. Also, 'task' and 'routine' should be plural to match the context. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I often jet with my friends through, uh messages app umm, I, we often talk about the, the task that we need to complete and some uh, interesting daily routine uh, and I think chatting is uh, one of my.

✓ I often chat with my friends through, uh, messaging apps. Umm, we often talk about the tasks that we need to complete and some, uh, interesting daily routines. Uh, and I think chatting is, uh, one of my favorites.

The nouns 'task' and 'routine' should be plural ('tasks' and 'routines') because the speaker refers to multiple tasks and routines. Using the correct plural form ensures subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Well, I usually chat with my friends some topics about studying, umm, from the task to, uh, what uh, we need to do in, uh, next day and, uh, some daily routines, uh, that we want to talk about. And I think it's really, uh.

✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about some topics related to studying, umm, from the tasks to, uh, what we need to do the next day and, uh, some daily routines, uh, that we want to talk about. And I think it's really, uh, interesting.

The phrase 'chat with my friends some topics' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with my friends about some topics.' Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Adding 'interesting' at the end completes the thought.

× Well, I usually chat with my friends some topics about studying, umm, from the task to, uh, what uh, we need to do in, uh, next day and, uh, some daily routines, uh, that we want to talk about. And I think it's really, uh.

✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about some topics related to studying, umm, from the tasks to, uh, what we need to do the next day and, uh, some daily routines, uh, that we want to talk about. And I think it's really, uh, interesting.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple assignments or duties. This correction ensures proper agreement and clarity.

× Well, I prefer, uh, Jack with one friend, just my best friend or something, one people on my, uh, jet app umm, because it's quite simple and I can, uh, share and, uh, uh, talk to them Com comfort comfortably and.

✓ Well, I prefer, uh, chatting with one friend, just my best friend or someone, one person on my, uh, chat app, umm, because it's quite simple and I can, uh, share and, uh, talk to them comfortably.

The word 'Jack' is a mispronunciation of 'chat.' 'One people' is incorrect; the singular form 'one person' should be used. Also, 'jet app' should be 'chat app.' These corrections fix singular/plural errors and word choice for clarity.

× Well, I prefer, uh, Jack with one friend, just my best friend or something, one people on my, uh, jet app umm, because it's quite simple and I can, uh, share and, uh, uh, talk to them Com comfort comfortably and.

✓ Well, I prefer, uh, chatting with one friend, just my best friend or someone, one person on my, uh, chat app, umm, because it's quite simple and I can, uh, share and, uh, talk to them comfortably.

The verb 'Jack' should be 'chatting' to correctly express the action. Using the '-ing' form after 'prefer' is grammatically correct. This correction improves verb form usage.

× Actually, I preferred MMM face to face communication, umm, because it help people and my friends, uh, stay connected and we can share uh, many stories with the umm, interesting factual reaction and it help build my relationship between other people.

✓ Actually, I prefer face-to-face communication, umm, because it helps people and my friends, uh, stay connected and we can share, uh, many stories with, umm, interesting factual reactions and it helps build my relationships with other people.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context suggests a present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it.' 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match 'other people.' These corrections fix tense and subject-verb agreement errors.

× Actually, I preferred MMM face to face communication, umm, because it help people and my friends, uh, stay connected and we can share uh, many stories with the umm, interesting factual reaction and it help build my relationship between other people.

✓ Actually, I prefer face-to-face communication, umm, because it helps people and my friends, uh, stay connected and we can share, uh, many stories with, umm, interesting factual reactions and it helps build my relationships with other people.

The verb 'help' must be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it.' Also, 'reaction' should be plural 'reactions' to match 'many stories.' These corrections ensure proper subject-verb agreement and noun number.

× Yes, sometime we are, uh, don't have, uh, in common some umm, topic or some test. So we, uh, sometimes have a argument and we just and we will umm, solve that problem by giving some, uh, idea each other.

✓ Yes, sometimes we don't have, uh, some, umm, topics or some tests in common. So we, uh, sometimes have an argument and we just, and we will, umm, solve that problem by giving some, uh, ideas to each other.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Topic' and 'test' should be plural 'topics' and 'tests' to match the context. 'A argument' should be 'an argument' because 'argument' starts with a vowel sound. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' and 'each other' needs the preposition 'to' for correct usage.

× Yes, sometime we are, uh, don't have, uh, in common some umm, topic or some test. So we, uh, sometimes have a argument and we just and we will umm, solve that problem by giving some, uh, idea each other.

✓ Yes, sometimes we don't have, uh, some, umm, topics or some tests in common. So we, uh, sometimes have an argument and we just, and we will, umm, solve that problem by giving some, uh, ideas to each other.

The phrase 'idea each other' is incorrect; it should be 'ideas to each other' to properly express the action of sharing ideas between people. Adding the preposition 'to' corrects the sentence structure.