聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「lying」はおそらく「Line」の誤りであり、SNSの名前も正確に言うべきです。また、冗長な表現や不明瞭な部分があるため、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I usually chat with my friends on social media platforms like Line or Instagram. We often talk about our daily lives, and whenever we have free time, we always chat.

建議: 時制の一貫性がなく、文が途切れ途切れで不自然です。話題を明確にし、文をつなげる接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

範例: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as university and family matters. Recently, we have been discussing our favorite hobbies.

建議: 文法ミスや繰り返しがあり、表現が不自然です。理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って文章を整理しましょう。

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in group chats, some people do not reply to messages, which annoys me.

建議: 回答が途中で途切れており、意味が伝わりません。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to understand emotions and avoid misunderstandings compared to chatting online.

建議: 文が不完全で意味が不明瞭です。文法を正しく使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different personalities and opinions, which can lead to disagreements.

× Yes, I usually chat with my friend on SNS like lying or Instagram.

✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends on SNS like Line or Instagram.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the speaker is referring to chatting with multiple people. Also, 'lying' is a typo and should be 'Line', a social media app.

× Uh we talk about our daily life and if we have a free time we chat always.

✓ Uh, we talk about our daily life and if we have free time, we always chat.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the verb 'chat' for correct adverb placement. Also, 'a free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× Umm yeah, we talked about our daily life like in university or with our family, but.

✓ Umm yeah, we talk about our daily life like at university or with our family.

The question asks about usual habits, so present tense 'talk' is appropriate instead of past tense 'talked'. Also, 'in university' should be 'at university' for correct preposition use.

× Umm yeah, we talked about our daily life like in university or with our family, but.

✓ Umm yeah, we talk about our daily life like at university or with our family.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at university' is the correct phrase to indicate location of study.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because in Group chat some some people can't uh, don't return their message or their message so it annoyed me.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because in group chats some people don't return their messages, so it annoys me.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to chat'. 'Group chat' should be plural 'group chats' to indicate general cases. 'Message' should be plural 'messages' because multiple messages are implied. 'Annoyed' should be 'annoys' to agree with the subject 'it' in present tense.

× Yeah, I prefer to communicate face to face because, umm, when, when we TA we, when we chat online, uh, sometimes, uh. The.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to communicate face to face because, umm, when we chat online, sometimes, uh...

The sentence is incomplete and contains unclear parts. Removing 'TA we' and the incomplete fragment improves clarity. 'Face to face' is correct as a phrase.

× Yes, yes, because my friend have a different personality as me and.

✓ Yes, yes, because my friends have different personalities from me and.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'have'. 'Personality' should be plural 'personalities' to match 'friends'. The preposition 'as' should be 'from' in comparisons.