聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases like 'thank you' at the end. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by focusing on one or two clear reasons and using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it allows us to share our feelings and understand each other's beliefs and emotions better.

建議: Avoid redundancy such as 'so as I am a travel lover person so'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how chatting helps you relieve stress.

範例: Since I love travelling, I usually chat with my friends about our travel plans, like where and when to go, which helps me relax and reduce stress.

建議: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use clear linking words to explain your preference and provide specific reasons. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a teamwork' to 'teamwork'.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group because teamwork allows us to share different opinions, which helps us gain more knowledge.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons why face-to-face communication is better.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can have internet issues, and in person, we can clearly see the other person's expressions to understand their interest.

建議: Avoid unclear phrases like 'arguably is important'. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide a clear reason why arguing can be beneficial, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially during teamwork discussions about topics like music, because it helps us understand each other's feelings better.

× Yes, I really love chatting with friends because in this way we can we can share our feelings to our friends and also we can know about their beliefs and their emotions.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with friends because in this way we can share our feelings with our friends and also we can learn about their beliefs and their emotions.

The phrase 'share our feelings to our friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' when sharing something with someone. Also, 'know about' is better replaced with 'learn about' to express gaining information. The repeated phrase 'we can' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× Yes, I really love chatting with friends because in this way we can we can share our feelings to our friends and also we can know about their beliefs and their emotions.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with friends because in this way we can share our feelings with our friends and also we can learn about their beliefs and their emotions.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'share'; the correct preposition is 'with'. This is a common prepositional error that affects the meaning of the sentence.

× So as I am a travel lover person so I always chat with my friends regarding plans like where to go, when to go so in this way I can release my stress.

✓ Since I am a travel lover, I always chat with my friends about plans like where to go and when to go; in this way, I can relieve my stress.

The phrase 'regarding plans' is better replaced with 'about plans' for natural English usage. Also, 'release my stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'relieve my stress'. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundant 'so' and adding proper punctuation.

× I like to chat with the like group of people.

✓ I like to chat with a group of people.

The phrase 'the like group of people' is incorrect and awkward. The correct phrase is 'a group of people'. The word 'like' is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× I think a teamwork is a great great way to help others like so in this way we can easily know know about other people's opinion.

✓ I think teamwork is a great way to help others; in this way, we can easily know about other people's opinions.

The word 'teamwork' is an uncountable noun and does not require the article 'a'. The repeated word 'great' and 'know' should be corrected. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because it refers to multiple people's views.

× I think a teamwork is a great great way to help others like so in this way we can easily know know about other people's opinion.

✓ I think teamwork is a great way to help others; in this way, we can easily know about other people's opinions.

The phrase 'know about other people's opinion' is better expressed as 'know about other people's opinions' to reflect plurality and correct preposition usage.

× I prefer face to face because in social media sometimes we lose the connection, Internet connection.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because sometimes we lose the internet connection on social media.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or noun. Also, 'lose the connection, Internet connection' is awkward; it is better to say 'lose the internet connection on social media' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× So in this way we can actually send the other person properly.

✓ This way, we can actually communicate properly with the other person.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'Send the other person properly' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely to communicate properly. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So in the face to face we can know, we can exactly know about the expressions of the person, whether he or she is interested in the.

✓ So in face-to-face communication, we can exactly understand the person's expressions and whether he or she is interested.

The phrase 'in the face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'in face-to-face communication'. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; it is corrected to clearly express understanding expressions and interest.

× Yes, I do when they don't understand me also like in the teamwork when we are discussing on the topic like regarding music or something else.

✓ Yes, I do when they don't understand me, especially in teamwork when we are discussing topics like music or something else.

The phrase 'discussing on the topic' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'discussing topics' or 'discussing the topic'. The preposition 'on' is unnecessary here.

× So we always talk. I think arguably is important to know about the feeling of of the other person.

✓ So we always talk. I think arguing is important to understand the feelings of the other person.

The word 'arguably' is an adverb meaning 'possibly' or 'it can be argued', which is incorrect here. The correct word is 'arguing' (the gerund form of 'argue'). Also, 'know about the feeling' is better expressed as 'understand the feelings'. The repeated word 'of' is removed.