聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and complete your sentences fully. For example, instead of repeating 'chatting with my friends', you can say 'I enjoy chatting with my friends because they help me relieve stress.'

範例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because they are the people who help me feel less stressed whenever I am overthinking. Talking to them always cheers me up and makes me feel supported.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to make it more coherent and by avoiding redundancy. Also, try to be more specific about the topics you discuss.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, especially my problems and worries. They always listen carefully and offer helpful advice, which makes me feel supported and understood.

建議: Complete your sentences fully and avoid leaving thoughts unfinished. Use linking words to contrast your preference with others and explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one trusted friend rather than a group because I feel more comfortable sharing my problems with someone who understands me well, unlike talking in front of strangers or many people.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and add a concluding sentence to summarize your preference.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows me to see people's facial expressions and hear their tone of voice, which social media cannot provide. Therefore, face-to-face communication feels more genuine to me.

建議: Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide a brief example or explanation to support your statement.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we understand each other well. Even when minor issues arise, we usually resolve them quickly through honest communication.

× I feel like whenever I'm stressed or overthinking about anything, the only people who can make me feel less stressed and worried is my friends.

✓ I feel like whenever I'm stressed or overthinking about anything, the only people who can make me feel less stressed and worried are my friends.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Chatting with them is.

✓ Chatting with them is comforting.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'is'. Adding a complement like 'comforting' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I feel like I can chat with them with everything about my problems or about my worries and doubts, and they can make me feel really heard and understood and supported.

✓ I feel like I can chat with them about everything, including my problems, worries, and doubts, and they can make me feel really heard, understood, and supported.

The phrase 'chat with them with everything about' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the topic of chat. Also, restructuring improves clarity.

× They give me solutions as if it's their own problem.

✓ They give me solutions as if it's their own problem.

No correction needed here as the pronoun usage is correct.

× I'm someone who really does not like talking about my problem with strangers or a group of people.

✓ I'm someone who really does not like talking about my problems with strangers or groups of people.

The noun 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context of multiple issues. Also, 'a group of people' can be simplified to 'groups of people' for generalization.

× Some people find it easy to talk about their problems in front of a group, but for me personally, I don't like that.

✓ Some people find it easy to talk about their problems in front of a group, but personally, I don't like that.

The phrase 'for me personally' is redundant. Using 'personally' alone is sufficient and more natural.

× I prefer talking to a trusted friend who can understand me and knows my personality and someone who.

✓ I prefer talking to a trusted friend who can understand me and knows my personality.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and someone who.' Removing the incomplete part completes the sentence.

× I think I'm someone who likes connecting or communicating face to face rather than social media.

✓ I think I'm someone who likes connecting or communicating face to face rather than via social media.

The phrase 'rather than social media' is missing the preposition 'via' to indicate the medium of communication.

× With social media, you cannot understand people's real emotions, like you cannot see their voice tone or facial expressions, which can hide a lot of truth about their emotions.

✓ With social media, you cannot understand people's real emotions, like you cannot hear their tone of voice or see their facial expressions, which can hide a lot of truth about their emotions.

'Voice tone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tone of voice'. Also, 'hear' is the appropriate verb for 'tone of voice'.

× Personally, I have never argued with my friends.

✓ Personally, I have never argued with my friends.

No correction needed; the present perfect tense is correctly used here.

× All of them were really understanding and match my personality and vibe.

✓ All of them were really understanding and matched my personality and vibe.

The verb 'match' should be in past tense 'matched' to agree with 'were' indicating past time.

× I never had any issue with them.

✓ I never had any issues with them.

The noun 'issue' should be plural 'issues' to indicate multiple possible problems, which is more natural in this context.

× If I ever had an issue it used to be a minor one.

✓ If I ever had an issue, it used to be a minor one.

A comma is needed after the conditional clause 'If I ever had an issue' to separate the clauses properly.