聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there is a grammatical error with 'love to chatting' which should be 'love chatting'. Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, you can say 'I love chatting with my friends because it helps me express my ideas and stay connected.'

範例: Yes, definitely. I love chatting with my friends because it helps me express my ideas and stay connected with them.

建議: Your answer is too brief and contains a likely mistake ('daily train' instead of 'daily routine'). Try to provide more specific details and correct vocabulary. For example, you can say 'I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine, such as what I did at work or school.'

範例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily routine, like what I did at work or school and any interesting events that happened.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Instead of 'introvert person', say 'an introvert'. Also, avoid saying 'only my 1 friend'; say 'just one friend'. For example, 'Well, since I am an introvert, I usually prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group.'

範例: Well, since I am an introvert, I usually prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because it feels more comfortable and personal.

建議: Your answer covers good points but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'Facebook expression'. Try to use linking words for coherence and correct vocabulary. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and effective. Also, we can easily read body language and facial expressions. However, in some situations, such as when friends live far away, I use social media as a better option.'

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and effective. Also, we can easily read body language and facial expressions. However, when friends live far away, I use social media as a better option to stay in touch.

建議: Your answer has unclear pronoun use ('he argues with my friends') and grammatical errors. Try to clarify and use correct grammar. For example, 'Sometimes I argue with my friends, but it is not a serious conflict. Usually, we just have different opinions on certain topics.'

範例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but it is not a serious conflict. Usually, we just have different opinions on certain topics and respect each other's views.

× I love to chatting with my friends because it helps me to express my ideas or to stay connected with them.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it helps me to express my ideas or to stay connected with them.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'To chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'.

× I usually chat with my friends about my daily train.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily train journey.

The word 'train' is a noun referring to a vehicle, but the intended meaning is likely 'train journey' or 'training'. Adding 'journey' clarifies the meaning.

× Well I am an introvert person so I always prefer to chat with only my 1 friend.

✓ Well, I am an introverted person so I always prefer to chat with only one friend.

'Introvert' should be 'introverted' as an adjective describing a person. Also, '1 friend' should be written as 'one friend' in formal writing.

× Well, I prefer to communicate face to face. I think it is a more genuine and effective.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face. I think it is more genuine and effective.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before uncountable adjectives 'more genuine and effective'. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.

× Also through the face to face communication we can easily read the body language and Facebook expression of other person.

✓ Also, through face-to-face communication, we can easily read the body language and facial expressions of the other person.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Facebook expression' is incorrect; it should be 'facial expressions'. Also, 'other person' needs the definite article 'the'.

× But yes in some condition I prefer to you communicate through the social medias like those who are living far from us.

✓ But yes, in some conditions, I prefer to communicate through social media with those who are living far from us.

'Prefer to you communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate'. 'Social medias' should be 'social media' as it is uncountable. Added 'with' to clarify the object of communication.

× Sometimes he argues with my friends, but it is not a conflict.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends, but it is not a conflict.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' as the speaker is referring to themselves. Also, 'argues' is correct for third person singular, but with 'I' it should be 'argue'.

× It is a normally argue about about the particular topic when we have a different different kinds of viewpoints or our opinions.

✓ It is a normal argument about a particular topic when we have different kinds of viewpoints or opinions.

'Normally argue' is incorrect; it should be 'normal argument'. Removed duplicate 'about'. 'Different different' is redundant; one 'different' suffices. 'Our opinions' can be simplified to 'opinions'.