聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'although my demanding work schedule as a doctor limits the time I can spend on it during weekdays,' you can say 'because of my demanding work schedule as a doctor, I have limited time during weekdays.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Because of my demanding work schedule as a doctor, I have limited time during weekdays. However, on weekends, I catch up with them through chatting, which helps me stay connected and close to my loved ones.

建議: Your answer provides relevant content but contains some redundancy and filler words like 'uh'. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Also, correct minor errors such as 'optimal ophthalmologists' should be 'ophthalmologists'.

範例: We have a WhatsApp group where we discuss various ideas about patient treatment and emergency cases from our daily hospital routines. Some of my friends are ophthalmologists, while others are ENT specialists. Therefore, most of our chats focus on patient care and treatment methods.

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains filler words. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'uh' and improve sentence structure for better flow.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group rather than with a single friend because I don't have a very close friend to chat with individually. In our WhatsApp group of medical doctors, we discuss various patient cases we encounter daily. This helps us share treatment methods and exchange ideas effectively.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat fragmented and contains filler words. Try to make your sentences complete and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more personal. However, when I don't have time or am far away, such as working in remote areas, I use social media like WhatsApp to stay in touch with my family.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid redundancy and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we have been close since childhood and understand each other's moods well. However, when we do argue, it is usually about patient care and treatment methods, which are important and unique topics for us.

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friends, although my demanding work schedule as a doctor limits the time I can spend on it during weekdays.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, although my demanding work schedule as a doctor limits the time I can spend on it during weekdays.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'limits' and 'can spend'. To maintain consistency and because the question is about a general preference, present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate.

× Well, we have a friends group on WhatsApp in which we discuss about different ideas regarding treatment of the patients and different cases in emergency cases in our daily routine hospitals.

✓ Well, we have a friends group on WhatsApp in which we discuss different ideas regarding the treatment of patients and various emergency cases in our daily routine hospitals.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'the patients' should be 'patients' for general reference, and 'different cases in emergency cases' is redundant; 'various emergency cases' is clearer.

× Uh, some of my friends are optimal ophthalmologists, some are ENT specialists.

✓ Uh, some of my friends are ophthalmologists, some are ENT specialists.

The word 'optimal' is incorrect here; likely a mispronunciation or misuse. The correct term is 'ophthalmologists' without 'optimal'. This is a vocabulary issue but affects clarity.

× So most of our jets are uh, on our patients and treatment based.

✓ So most of our chats are, uh, based on our patients and their treatment.

The word 'jets' is incorrect; likely a mispronunciation of 'chats'. Also, the phrase 'on our patients and treatment based' is awkward; 'based on our patients and their treatment' is correct.

× We have a WhatsApp group of all the medical, uh, doctors who discuss on different medical cases of their patients, uh, that you encounter in our everyday life.

✓ We have a WhatsApp group of all the medical, uh, doctors who discuss different medical cases of their patients, uh, that we encounter in our everyday life.

The verb 'discuss' does not take the preposition 'on'. Also, 'you encounter' should be 'we encounter' to maintain consistency with the speaker's perspective.

× I think social media is a best way to communicate with such people, uh, with whom you are far away or distant apart.

✓ I think social media is the best way to communicate with such people, uh, who are far away or distant from you.

The phrase 'a best way' is incorrect; 'the best way' is the correct superlative form. Also, 'with whom you are far away or distant apart' is awkward; 'who are far away or distant from you' is clearer.

× Like if I'm working in uh, remote areas, then WhatsApp is the best way to communicate with my family.

✓ Like if I'm working in, uh, remote areas, then WhatsApp is the best way to communicate with my family.

This sentence is correct in grammar; no correction needed here.

× Not much as we are best friends in our since our childhood so we know the anger issues and mood swings of each other very well and how to handle these mood swings.

✓ Not much, as we have been best friends since our childhood, so we know each other's anger issues and mood swings very well and how to handle them.

The original sentence has awkward structure and missing words. 'In our since our childhood' is incorrect; 'have been best friends since our childhood' is correct. Also, 'anger issues and mood swings of each other' should be 'each other's anger issues and mood swings'.

× We also know that so we friends don't argue much but sometimes when we argue we usually argue on patient care and treatment methods and very different and unique topics.

✓ We also know that, so we friends don't argue much, but sometimes when we argue, we usually argue about patient care, treatment methods, and other very different and unique topics.

The phrase 'argue on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'argue about'. Also, commas are needed for clarity, and 'and very different and unique topics' should be 'and other very different and unique topics'.