聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and completing your thoughts clearly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel connected. Whether we talk in person or send messages, it always brightens my day.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically, use correct pronouns, and provide specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: We usually chat about various topics, but mostly about our relationships. For example, when I face problems with coworkers or my career, I ask my friends for advice, and they always help me.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer chatting with my best friend because talking in a group can be exhausting and challenging for me. One-on-one conversations feel more comfortable and meaningful.

建議: Your answer is somewhat disorganized and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary details that may confuse the listener. Use linking words to contrast options and explain your preference.

範例: Both face-to-face communication and social media have their advantages. However, since I am an emotional person, I prefer face-to-face interactions because they allow me to connect more deeply with others.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: When I was a kid and teenager, I used to argue with my friends. However, now we are more patient with each other. I believe that understanding their feelings and personalities helps prevent arguments.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends and in my opinion, chatting with friends or talking or sending a text message, it could be really helpful for a relaxation and just it's.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends and in my opinion, chatting with friends or talking or sending a text message could be really helpful for relaxation and just that.

The phrase 'a relaxation' is incorrect because 'relaxation' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article 'a'. Also, 'just it's' is unclear and should be corrected to 'just that' to complete the thought properly.

× Actually we chat about everything but most of the time we are chatting and talking about our relationship and that's where they ask her for advice.

✓ Actually, we chat about everything but most of the time we are chatting and talking about our relationship and that's where I ask her for advice.

The pronouns 'they' and 'her' are incorrectly used here. Since the speaker is referring to themselves seeking advice from a female friend, 'I' and 'her' should be used appropriately to reflect the subject and object.

× They can give me advice for our relationship and if I have any problem with coworkers or our career, I ask her and she give me an advice.

✓ She can give me advice for our relationship and if I have any problem with coworkers or my career, I ask her and she gives me advice.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect when referring to a single person; it should be 'She'. Also, 'give me an advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with 'she'.

× They can give me advice for our relationship and if I have any problem with coworkers or our career, I ask her and she give me an advice.

✓ She can give me advice for our relationship and if I have any problem with coworkers or my career, I ask her and she gives me advice.

The word 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'an'. Instead, use 'advice' without an article.

× Actually, which I think with a group it took me lots of energy and with it would be really challenging for me.

✓ Actually, I think chatting with a group takes a lot of energy and would be really challenging for me.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Which I think' is misplaced and 'it took me lots of energy' is past tense inconsistent with the present context. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer structure.

× Actually, which I think with a group it took me lots of energy and with it would be really challenging for me.

✓ Actually, I think chatting with a group takes a lot of energy and would be really challenging for me.

The verb 'took' is past tense and does not agree with the present tense context. Also, 'it took me' should be 'it takes me' or better 'chatting with a group takes' to match the subject. The verb 'takes' is third person singular and agrees with the singular subject.

× Both of them are really good and interesting, but for me that I am an emotional person, I prefer face to face because I can connect with those person that is in real life in, in front of me and I can, uh, touch her hair or his hand and I can.

✓ Both of them are really good and interesting, but for me, since I am an emotional person, I prefer face to face because I can connect with the person who is in real life, in front of me, and I can, uh, touch her hair or his hand.

The phrase 'those person' is incorrect because 'those' is plural and 'person' is singular; it should be 'the person'. Also, 'that is' should be 'who is' when referring to people. The sentence is also clarified for better flow.

× When I was kid and teenager, yeah, I had argue with my friends, but nowadays they became a person that is really more patient than before.

✓ When I was a kid and teenager, yeah, I argued with my friends, but nowadays they have become people who are really more patient than before.

The phrase 'I had argue' is incorrect; the past tense of 'argue' is 'argued'. Also, 'they became a person' is incorrect because 'they' is plural and 'a person' is singular; it should be 'they have become people'. The verb tense is corrected to present perfect to indicate change over time.

× When I was kid and teenager, yeah, I had argue with my friends, but nowadays they became a person that is really more patient than before.

✓ When I was a kid and teenager, yeah, I argued with my friends, but nowadays they have become people who are really more patient than before.

The pronoun 'they' refers to multiple friends, so it should be followed by plural nouns and verbs. 'A person' is singular and does not agree with 'they'. It should be 'people who are' to maintain agreement.

× And no, I love them and in my opinion, if you understand their feeling and recognizing their personality, you cannot argue with them.

✓ And no, I love them and in my opinion, if you understand their feelings and recognize their personalities, you cannot argue with them.

The nouns 'feeling' and 'personality' should be plural ('feelings' and 'personalities') to agree with the plural pronoun 'their'. Also, the verb 'recognizing' should be parallel with 'understand' and thus changed to 'recognize'.