聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question and providing a reason or example. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

範例: I didn't enjoy chatting with friends when I was a child because I was shy. However, I realized that staying distant affected our relationship, so I started to enjoy talking with them more.

建議: Your answer is brief and could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to use more natural expressions and avoid awkward phrasing.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about how they are doing and what’s new in their lives. For example, I often ask about their work or studies to keep up with them.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more fluent. Try to avoid repetition and explain your preference with more specific reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I’m an introvert and find it easier to express myself. In a group, I often feel shy and can’t ask all the questions I want.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by using correct tenses and avoiding repeated words. Also, explain your preference clearly with reasons.

範例: When I was younger, I used social media to chat with friends, but I felt it limited my ability to express myself. Now, I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and effective.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and some grammatical mistakes. Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clearer explanation with linking words.

範例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends to keep peace. However, if they don’t listen or understand my point, I try to explain myself firmly.

× Earlier when I was a child I used to not chat much with my friends and also I used to hate it.

✓ Earlier when I was a child, I did not chat much with my friends and I also used to hate it.

The phrase 'used to not chat' is awkward; the correct form is 'did not chat' to express past habits negatively. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase for clarity.

× But after a few days when I got got to know that I'm staying away my away with my friends and also not having a good relation with my friends, I tried to like it.

✓ But after a few days, when I got to know that I was staying away from my friends and not having a good relationship with them, I tried to like it.

The sentence has repeated 'got', incorrect tense 'I'm staying' should be past 'I was staying', missing preposition 'from' after 'staying away', and 'relation' should be 'relationship'. Also, commas improve readability.

× I usually chat about asking their well-being and sometimes I ask about the life they are going on.

✓ I usually chat by asking about their well-being, and sometimes I ask about the life they are living.

The phrase 'chat about asking' is incorrect; 'chat by asking' is better. Also, 'the life they are going on' is awkward; 'the life they are living' is more natural.

× I usually prefer to chat personally because I can.

✓ I usually prefer to chat personally because I can focus better.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'focus better' clarifies the reason for preferring personal chat.

× If I chat in a group, I cannot ask all the questions because I'm a type of introvert person where I cannot ask all all of the questions that I wanted.

✓ If I chat in a group, I cannot ask all the questions because I am an introverted person and cannot ask all the questions I want.

The phrase 'a type of introvert person' is awkward; 'an introverted person' is correct. Also, 'all all of the questions' is repetitive and 'that I wanted' should be 'I want' to match present tense preference.

× Earlier when I was a child, I used to chat with my friends on social media but I thought I thought it would ruin our relationship and also I cannot express my whole thoughts so I now prefer to communicate via face to face.

✓ Earlier when I was a child, I used to chat with my friends on social media, but I thought it would ruin our relationship and I could not express all my thoughts, so now I prefer to communicate face to face.

Repeated 'I thought' is an error. 'Cannot' should be past tense 'could not' to match 'thought'. 'Whole thoughts' is better as 'all my thoughts'. Also, 'via face to face' should be 'face to face' without 'via'.

× Most of the time I prefer not to argue with my friends in order to avoid dispute between between us, but when he doesn't listen to me or if he doesn't understand my point, I try to argue.

✓ Most of the time, I prefer not to argue with my friends in order to avoid disputes between us, but when he doesn't listen to me or doesn't understand my point, I try to argue.

Repeated 'between' is an error. 'Dispute' should be plural 'disputes' to match context. A comma after 'Most of the time' improves readability.