聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh' and 'share, share'. Also, make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. For example, instead of repeating 'share', say 'talk about'.

範例: I love chatting with my friends. We usually hang out on weekends and talk about what happened during the week. It helps me relieve stress and makes me happy to connect with them.

建議: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'got shipped with her back'. Use clear and specific vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas logically.

範例: We usually talk about what happened during the week, such as work or family situations. Sometimes, my friend shares funny stories about her outfits, which always makes me laugh.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing sentences. Use linking words to connect your points and correct grammar mistakes.

範例: It depends. Sometimes I prefer talking with my best friend because we can share everything. However, when we talk too much, I enjoy chatting with a group of friends since we have many things to share.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because you can see emotions on their faces, which makes it easier to follow the conversation compared to just typing on a screen.

建議: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Make your sentences more fluent and use linking words to explain your opinion.

範例: Sometimes we have conflicts, but I think arguing is good because it helps us understand each other better and strengthens our connection.

× I love chatting with my friends.

✓ I love chatting with my friends.

No correction needed; 'chatting' is correctly used as a present participle after 'love'.

× We usually hang out on the weekend and share, share about uh, what's, what's going on during a week.

✓ We usually hang out on the weekends and share about what's going on during the week.

'Weekend' should be plural 'weekends' to indicate habitual action. 'During a week' is better expressed as 'during the week' to refer to the current or general week.

× So I believe it's uh, not only help me to relieve stress, uh, but I'm sure happy to connect with my friends.

✓ So I believe it not only helps me to relieve stress, but I'm sure happy to connect with my friends.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'not only' should be followed by the verb in correct form. 'I'm sure happy' is acceptable but could be improved to 'I'm surely happy' or 'I'm happy'.

× Well, we usually talk about what, uh, happened during a week, uh, about, uh, the work or our family, uh, situation.

✓ Well, we usually talk about what happened during the week, about work or our family situation.

'During a week' should be 'during the week' to refer to the current or general week. 'The work' is better as 'work' without 'the' in this context. 'Family situation' is a compound noun and does not need a comma.

× So sometimes she told me about a funny story in, uh, her outfit and I also got shipped with her back.

✓ So sometimes she tells me about a funny story about her outfit and I also laughed with her back.

'Told' should be 'tells' to match the present habitual action. 'In her outfit' is incorrect; 'about her outfit' is correct. 'Got shipped with her back' is unclear; likely intended 'laughed with her' or 'shared a laugh with her'.

× But sometime because we talked a lot, uh, even we met together or we chat through the social media, we have noticed this talk.

✓ But sometimes because we talk a lot, even when we meet together or chat through social media, we have noticed this talk.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Talked' should be 'talk' to maintain present tense consistency. 'We chat' is correct. 'Social media' does not need 'the'.

× So I live with a group of friends.

✓ So I live with a group of friends.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Well, I think I refer communicating face to face, uh, the first reason you can see the emotional, uh, on their face and you can catch up, uh, easy to catch up the conversation other than just, uh, typing and typing on the screen.

✓ Well, I think I prefer communicating face to face. The first reason is you can see the emotions on their face and it's easier to catch up with the conversation rather than just typing on the screen.

'Refer' should be 'prefer' to express preference. 'Emotional' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Easy to catch up the conversation' should be 'easier to catch up with the conversation'. Sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Sometimes, sometimes if we, uh, have a conflict, umm, idea, but I think it's a good, it's a good thing because, uh, after they argue, we know each other deeply and umm, we can connect more.

✓ Sometimes, if we have a conflicting idea, I think it's a good thing because after we argue, we get to know each other more deeply and can connect better.

'Have a conflict, idea' is incorrect; should be 'have a conflicting idea'. 'After they argue' should be 'after we argue' to match the subject. 'Know each other deeply' is better as 'get to know each other more deeply'. 'Connect more' improved to 'connect better'.