聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me reduce stress and anxiety. Moreover, talking to them makes me feel relaxed and supported.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas.

範例: We usually chat about our daily lives, such as what happened during the day, our plans, and any interesting events.

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and organize your ideas clearly. Use linking words to explain your preference and give reasons.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more fun and lively. When I talk to many friends, the conversation is more interesting and full of humour.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has many pauses and unclear phrases. Try to avoid filler words and complete your sentences properly. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express my emotions fully. Also, people can understand me better when we meet in person rather than through social media.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but has many repetitions and unclear expressions. Try to speak more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain your feelings and reasons.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but it is not negative. I argue because I care about them and want to maintain a strong relationship.

× I like chatting with my friends because whenever I am chatting it helps to reduce my my tensions and my stress.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because whenever I am chatting it helps to reduce my tension and my stress.

The word 'tensions' is incorrectly pluralized here. 'Tension' is generally used as an uncountable noun when referring to stress or mental pressure, so it should be singular. Using 'tensions' is uncommon and sounds unnatural in this context.

× We usually chat regarding adding our daily life stuffs and also we we will chat with with what about things are going in our daily life then and we used to speak about the things things in our.

✓ We usually chat about our daily life stuff and also we chat about what is going on in our daily life, and we used to speak about these things.

The preposition 'regarding' is awkward here; 'chat about' is the correct collocation. 'Adding' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity.

× We usually chat regarding adding our daily life stuffs and also we we will chat with with what about things are going in our daily life then and we used to speak about the things things in our.

✓ We usually chat about our daily life stuff and also we chat about what is going on in our daily life, and we used to speak about these things.

'Stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'things things' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'these things' for clarity.

× chatting with a group of people will, uh, will help to make us more happiness, happy, happy, rather than rather, uh, chatting with, uh, Devon friend because uh, while, uh, that one friend and don't have that much, uh, humor or that much.

✓ Chatting with a group of people will help to make us happier rather than chatting with one friend because that one friend doesn't have much humor.

The verb 'don't' is incorrectly used with singular subject 'that one friend'; it should be 'doesn't'. Also, 'more happiness, happy, happy' is incorrect; 'happier' is the correct comparative adjective here.

× while, uh, that one friend and don't have that much, uh, humor or that much.

✓ while that one friend doesn't have that much humor.

The sentence fragment lacks a proper subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage. 'Don't' is incorrect for singular subject; it should be 'doesn't'. The sentence was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer to communicate face to face, uh, rather than social media, uh, because, uh, speaking, uh, face to face will uh, show our whole emotions to other person.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because speaking face to face shows all our emotions to the other person.

The phrase 'rather than social media' is incomplete; it should be 'rather than via social media' to indicate the medium. Also, 'show our whole emotions to other person' is corrected to 'shows all our emotions to the other person' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Uh, send they, they can't judge, uh, they don't judge us while uh, we are speaking in social media, they will judge us through because they are not seeing our.

✓ They can't judge us when we speak face to face, but on social media, they judge us because they cannot see us.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and unclear phrasing. 'Send they' is incorrect and removed. 'They don't judge us while we are speaking in social media' is incorrect; it should be 'They can't judge us when we speak face to face, but on social media, they judge us because they cannot see us.' This clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× Yes, I argue with my friends. It is not not about the not a bad, bad, bad or any any disturbance feeling.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends. It is not about bad feelings or any disturbance.

The sentence contains repeated words and awkward phrasing. 'Not not about the not a bad, bad, bad or any any disturbance feeling' is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'It is not about bad feelings or any disturbance' for clarity and correctness.

× It's like to to show that that I care about them and them and and I really want them in my life for that I I argue with my friends.

✓ It's to show that I care about them and that I really want them in my life. For that reason, I argue with my friends.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear structure. 'It's like to to show that that I care about them and them and and I really want them in my life for that I I argue with my friends' is corrected to a clearer and grammatically correct sentence. This improves readability and meaning.