聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est naturelle mais un peu redondante et manque de structure claire. Essayez de commencer par une phrase directe répondant à la question, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially online. For instance, I am part of an active group chat where we talk about various topics throughout the day, which keeps me connected and entertained.

建議: Votre réponse est complète mais un peu longue et répétitive. Utilisez des phrases plus courtes et des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées clairement. Soyez plus précis dans les exemples pour enrichir votre réponse.

範例: We usually chat about our daily activities and sometimes discuss topics like politics or pop culture. For example, last week we debated a recent movie release, which made the conversation very engaging.

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase claire exprimant votre préférence, suivie d'une explication concise. Évitez les répétitions inutiles.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in groups because I find it easier to express my thoughts clearly. In group chats, I usually listen more than speak.

建議: Votre réponse est naturelle mais un peu désorganisée et contient des répétitions. Organisez vos idées avec des mots de liaison et évitez les phrases incomplètes pour améliorer la fluidité.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to focus fully on the conversation. Although I use social media to chat with close friends, I find in-person talks more meaningful.

建議: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être plus concise et mieux structurée. Utilisez des phrases plus courtes et des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent et naturel.

範例: Yes, I often argue with my close friends, but it's just a way we communicate without causing any hard feelings. However, with acquaintances, I prefer to listen quietly rather than argue.

× I chat a lot with my friends in online or inside like at school, but specifically online, like using social media.

✓ I chat a lot with my friends online or inside, like at school, but specifically online, like using social media.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'online'. The correct usage is to say 'chat online' without 'in'. Also, 'inside like at school' is awkward; 'inside' is unnecessary here. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without 'in' and 'inside'.

× I never, I have a group of friends, like Easter group of friends and it's always active.

✓ I have a group of friends, like an Easter group of friends, and it's always active.

The phrase 'I never, I have' is incorrect and confusing. The word 'Easter' seems to be a mishearing or typo; assuming it means 'close' or 'inner' group, it should be clarified or corrected. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'Easter group'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× We just throw it in the group chat and discuss about it and no one will get bored of it and that's quite fun.

✓ We just throw it in the group chat and discuss it, and no one will get bored of it, and that's quite fun.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect. The correct form is 'discuss it'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× So really, if you're asking me if I actually want to talk to plural people, well, I don't like that.

✓ So really, if you're asking me if I actually want to talk to multiple people, well, I don't like that.

The phrase 'talk to plural people' is incorrect. 'Plural' is a grammatical term, not used in this context. The correct expression is 'multiple people' or 'more than one person'.

× I prefer on site.

✓ I prefer on-site.

The phrase 'on site' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or adverb meaning 'in person' or 'at the location'. Also, 'on-site' is more appropriate than 'on site' in this context.

× I hate answering on social media but on site you can have my full attention, full focus and I'm actually not overcompensating with no.

✓ I hate answering on social media, but on-site you can have my full attention, full focus, and I'm actually not overcompensating with no.

The phrase 'answering on social media' is acceptable, but adding commas improves clarity. The phrase 'overcompensating with no' is unclear and likely a speech filler or error; it is left as is due to lack of context.

× Me and my closest friends argue a lot and we it's never, there's never bad blood between us.

✓ My closest friends and I argue a lot, and there's never bad blood between us.

The phrase 'Me and my closest friends' is incorrect; the subject pronoun 'I' should be used, and it is polite to mention oneself last. The phrase 'we it's never' is ungrammatical and redundant; 'there's never bad blood between us' suffices.

× But with people that don't know me that much, I'd rather still come and silent and listen.

✓ But with people who don't know me that much, I'd rather stay silent and listen.

The phrase 'come and silent' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'stay silent'. Also, 'people that' should be 'people who' when referring to persons.