聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免重复表达，句子结构需更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. For example, I talk with my classmates every day, which makes us closer and supports each other.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: My friends and I often talk about chemistry since it's our elective subject. We discuss difficult tasks given by the teacher and help each other complete them.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，避免重复。

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it makes me happier. Also, when I face problems, more people can offer different ideas to help me solve them.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词需改进，建议使用更自然的表达方式和连接词。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better understand others' feelings and thoughts. For instance, if someone is upset, I can notice it immediately, which is hard to do through social media.

建議: 回答不完整且语法混乱，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, we always try to understand each other and resolve our problems peacefully.

× So we can't only work on ourselves, but we need to talk with others like I will talk with my classmate everyday.

✓ So we can't only work on ourselves, but we need to talk with others. For example, I talk with my classmate every day.

句子中“like I will talk”结构不正确，且“everyday”应为副词短语“every day”。建议拆分句子并调整时态，使表达更自然。

× So our bonds between us can strengthen and it can actually act as a partner in our lives and spend time.

✓ So the bonds between us can strengthen, and they can actually act as partners in our lives and help us spend time together.

“bonds between us”前应加定冠词“the”，且“act as a partner”应改为复数“partners”，因为“bonds”是复数。

× So because me and my friend also trust chemistry as our elective so we will always check some topics about chemistry because both of us like chemistry for merge and because the teacher always give us some difficult tasks so we'll discuss about them and finish the task together.

✓ Because my friend and I also take chemistry as our elective, we always check some topics about chemistry since both of us like it. Also, because the teacher always gives us some difficult tasks, we discuss them and finish the tasks together.

“me and my friend”应改为“I and my friend”或“my friend and I”；“trust chemistry”应为“take chemistry”；“discuss about”错误，动词“discuss”后不加介词“about”；动词时态和单复数需调整。

× So actually I prefer chat with a good of people because I think human are social animal.

✓ So actually I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think humans are social animals.

“prefer chat”应为“prefer to chat”；“a good of people”应为“a group of people”；“human are social animal”应为“humans are social animals”，主谓一致和单复数错误。

× So I actually prefer communicate face to face because face to face I can know what they feel and what they think in a more realistic way.

✓ So I actually prefer to communicate face to face because in face-to-face communication, I can know what they feel and think in a more realistic way.

“prefer communicate”应为“prefer to communicate”；“face to face”作为名词短语时应加介词“in”；表达更自然。

× And if they feel then not well, I can initially know, but social media cannot show me their feelings.

✓ And if they feel not well, I can immediately know, but social media cannot show me their feelings.

“feel then not well”语序错误，应为“feel not well”；“initially know”用词不当，应为“immediately know”。

× So as a secondary school student as my friends also so I will say yes, but I know that every argument we both have our problems and we will definitely say our point of view and step on each other Source and.

✓ As a secondary school student, and since my friends are too, I will say yes. But I know that in every argument, we both have our problems, and we definitely express our points of view without stepping on each other's toes.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整表达；“step on each other Source and”不通顺，应改为“step on each other's toes”，表达更准确。