聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I like chat, chatting" yerine "I like chatting" demeniz daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, "extra extra good" ifadesi yerine daha uygun ve doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve etkili yapmak için gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I feel exhausted and tired, talking to them helps me relax and feel much better.

建議: Cevabınız açık ancak cümleleriniz biraz kısa ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha doğal ve akıcı olması için cümleleri birleştirebilir ve bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, daha spesifik detaylar ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

範例: I usually chat about future plans, discussing school topics with my classmates and talking about work-related matters with my colleagues.

建議: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "like listen" yerine "like to listen" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "one people's ideas" ifadesi yanlış, "one person's ideas" olmalı. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bu hataları düzeltin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi genişletin.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I like to listen to many different ideas rather than just one person's opinion.

建議: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ancak "prefer communicate" yerine "prefer to communicate" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, "mimics" kelimesi yerine "facial expressions" daha uygun olur çünkü "mimics" genellikle taklit anlamına gelir. Cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see facial expressions and head movements, which makes the communication more intimate and effective.

建議: Cevabınız açık ancak bazı tekrarlar ve bağlaç eksiklikleri var. "I like to argue with my friends because it helps me to understand different ideas" cümlesi yeterli, diğer cümleleri bağlaçlarla birleştirerek daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, "And" ile başlayan cümlelerden kaçının.

範例: Yes, I argue with my friends about many things because it helps me understand different ideas, which is really helpful for improving our communication.

× Yes, I like chat, chatting with friends because when I feel exhausted and tired umm I chat with my friends and I feel extra extra good and they make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because when I feel exhausted and tired, I chat with my friends and I feel extra good and they make me feel relaxed.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'like chat' is incorrect; it should be 'like chatting'. Also, 'extra extra good' is redundant; 'extra good' suffices.

× I chat about job with my colleagues.

✓ I chat about jobs with my colleagues.

When talking about general topics, plural form is often used. 'Job' should be plural 'jobs' to indicate various job-related topics. Also, 'about job' is less natural than 'about jobs'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I really like listen to lots of people's ideas instead of one people's ideas.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I really like listening to lots of people's ideas instead of one person's ideas.

The phrase 'like listen' is incorrect; after 'like' the gerund form 'listening' should be used. Also, 'one people's ideas' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; the singular possessive 'one person's ideas' is correct.

× I prefer communicate face to face because when I communicate face to face, I can see their facial expressions and their head movements and their mimics.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I communicate face to face, I can see their facial expressions, head movements, and facial mimics.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to communicate'. Also, 'mimics' is better expressed as 'facial mimics' or 'facial expressions'. Commas are added for clarity.