聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không đúng ngữ pháp và ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và có ý nghĩa cụ thể.

範例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts with them.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện với bạn bè.

範例: Usually, my friends and I talk about how to improve ourselves, study tips, or sometimes we discuss math problems together.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và nói rõ bạn thích trò chuyện với một người hay nhóm bạn, kèm theo lý do cụ thể.

範例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am quite shy and feel more comfortable in a small group rather than a large one.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ưu điểm của từng phương thức giao tiếp và đưa ra lựa chọn của mình một cách mạch lạc.

範例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it is easier to understand each other's feelings, although social media is convenient for quick messages.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và không rõ ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích khi nào bạn và bạn bè tranh luận và cách giải quyết.

範例: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue when we have different opinions, but we always try to solve the problems peacefully.

× Yes, shutting is the way to love himself.

✓ Yes, chatting is the way to love oneself.

The word 'shutting' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to talking with friends is 'chatting'. Also, 'himself' should be 'oneself' to refer generally to a person.

× After 1/2 day just testing myself and I just kept boring.

✓ After half a day of just testing myself, I just got bored.

The sentence structure is incorrect and 'kept boring' is wrong; the correct past tense form is 'got bored' to express feeling uninterested.

× I just get boring.

✓ I just get bored.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, while 'bored' describes the feeling. Here, the student should use 'bored' to express their feeling.

× After being side effect I probably came up with anything the child would go.

✓ After experiencing side effects, I probably came up with nothing that the child would do.

The sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Side effect' should be 'side effects' and the phrase 'came up with anything the child would go' is confusing; it should be rephrased for clarity.

× Despite loving shouting, I barely come up with anything to drive to drive with them.

✓ Despite loving chatting, I barely come up with anything to talk about with them.

'Shouting' is incorrect in this context; 'chatting' fits better. Also, 'drive to drive' is a repetition and incorrect; it should be 'talk about'.

× But normally we talk about how to improve ourself or away.

✓ But normally we talk about how to improve ourselves or our ways.

'Ourself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun for 'we' is 'ourselves'. 'Away' is likely a mistake for 'our way' or 'our ways'.

× To solve a math problem.

✓ We also talk about how to solve math problems.

This is a sentence fragment without a subject and verb; it should be connected to the previous sentence or made complete.

× If I have to pick to go with one but I'm so far away, Two or three fans chatting together because umm, very shy.

✓ If I have to pick, I would go with one friend, but since I'm far away, two or three friends chat together because I am very shy.

'Fans' is incorrect; it should be 'friends'. Also, the sentence lacks proper structure and punctuation.

× Talking a lot of people and I'm not really talkative in a group of friends.

✓ Talking to a lot of people is difficult, and I'm not really talkative in a group of friends.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'talking' and the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I love to communicate with my friend through social media.

✓ Yes, I love to communicate with my friends through social media.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general context of chatting with multiple people.

× Uh, but to face the wife, the face to face method for us to get ourselves, get out easier and understand what we want to what we want to transfer to the other.

✓ But face-to-face communication helps us express ourselves more easily and understand what we want to convey to others.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'to face the wife' instead of 'face-to-face'. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, we do have good.

✓ Yes, we do have good relationships.

The sentence is incomplete; 'good' needs a noun to complete the meaning.

× Sometimes we are good about how to solve this is my problem which way I connect mine or his or disagree.

✓ Sometimes we discuss how to solve problems, whether to follow my way or his, or when we disagree.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; it needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning.

× Which one is being repaired?

✓ We try to repair our relationship when we disagree.

The original sentence is unclear and does not fit the context; it should be rephrased to express repairing relationships after disagreements.