聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I really enjoy chatting with my friends' instead of 'I really enjoyed to chatting'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Since we are in a long-distance relationship, chatting helps us maintain a strong bond. For example, she lives in another city while I live elsewhere, so we cannot meet face to face often.

建議: Try to be more specific and use precise vocabulary. Also, clarify unclear phrases like 'personal life scores'. Use linking words to improve coherence, such as 'in addition' or 'also'.

範例: My friends and I usually chat about various topics. For example, we often share funny or interesting stories that have gone viral online. In addition, we discuss our personal lives and future plans to stay connected. Mostly, we chat, but sometimes we call each other.

建議: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, explain why you prefer group chats with specific reasons and examples.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to discuss many different topics at the same time. Most of the time, I feel relaxed and refreshed because my friends share similar interests and experiences.

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to compare both methods clearly. Also, explain your preferences with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to communicate via social media because we are often busy with work or studies. Social media is a convenient platform to stay connected and maintain strong bonds. However, face-to-face communication feels more genuine, especially for important matters.

建議: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words like 'uh'. Explain your feelings about arguing with friends with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: No, I do not like to argue with my friends because it can damage our friendship. Arguing creates a negative atmosphere, so I always try to be kind and maintain good relationships.

× Yes, I really enjoyed to chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive with 'to'. Therefore, 'to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'.

× Nowadays we are have a long distance uh relationship.

✓ Nowadays we have a long-distance relationship.

The phrase 'are have' is incorrect; 'have' is the correct present tense verb here. Also, 'long distance' should be hyphenated as 'long-distance' when used as an adjective.

× Chatting make a good bond with our relation.

✓ Chatting makes a good bond with our relationship.

The subject 'Chatting' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make'. Also, 'relation' is better expressed as 'relationship' in this context.

× she lives in another city and I live in others, so that's why we cannot meet face to face.

✓ She lives in another city and I live in another, so that's why we cannot meet face to face.

The word 'others' is incorrect here; it should be 'another' to refer to a different city.

× Actually I prefer group of people because the time there are many friends are here and we talk to another different kind of topics the time.

✓ Actually, I prefer groups of people because at times there are many friends here and we talk about different kinds of topics at the same time.

'Group of people' should be plural 'groups of people' to match the context. Also, the sentence structure and prepositions needed correction for clarity.

× we talk to another different kind of topics the time.

✓ we talk about different kinds of topics at the same time.

The correct preposition with 'talk' is 'about', not 'to'. Also, 'another different kind of topics' is incorrect; it should be 'different kinds of topics'. 'The time' should be 'at the same time'.

× Most of the time I feel so much relaxed and refreshed because they are same path.

✓ Most of the time I feel very relaxed and refreshed because we are on the same path.

'They' is incorrect pronoun here; it should be 'we' to refer to the speaker and friends. Also, 'so much relaxed' is better as 'very relaxed'. 'Same path' needs the preposition 'on'.

× I prefer communicate with social media because nowadays we are busy with our schedule like work field or study.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because nowadays we are busy with our schedules like work or study.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to communicate'. 'With social media' is better expressed as 'via social media'. 'Schedule' should be plural 'schedules'. 'Work field' is better simplified to 'work'.

× But face to face communicate are so much real because of business.

✓ But face-to-face communication is much more real because of business.

'Communicate' is a verb; the noun form 'communication' is needed here. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. The verb should be singular 'is' to agree with singular noun 'communication'. 'So much real' is better as 'much more real'.

× No, I cannot like to argue with my friends because I will, uh, destroy our friendship.

✓ No, I don't like to argue with my friends because I might destroy our friendship.

'Cannot like' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'don't like'. Also, 'will' suggests certainty; 'might' is better to express possibility.

× It's a chance to uh, make a bad bond with us.

✓ It's a chance to, uh, damage our bond.

'Make a bad bond with us' is awkward and incorrect. The phrase 'damage our bond' is clearer and more natural. Also, 'with us' is unnecessary here.

× I always try to make a kind person and my friend.

✓ I always try to be a kind person and a good friend.

'Make a kind person and my friend' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'try to be a kind person and a good friend'.