聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，如“gives me useful advices”应为“gives me useful advice”，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词形式和不可数名词的使用，同时避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I have a few close friends, including one named Lily. Whenever I feel stressed or have friendship issues, I talk to her because she gives me useful advice and helps me relax.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“their speech can really gives me more ideas and help me to”未完成句子。建议注意句子完整性和动词形式，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I majored in preschool education, so most of my friends are in the same field. We often discuss knowledge related to this area and share ideas on how to provide better education for children, which really inspires me.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“1 chat”应为“I chat”，“can't express my emotional, uh, great”表达不明确。建议练习清晰表达情感和正确使用代词。

範例: It depends. When I chat with a group, we share stories and have fun together. However, sometimes I find it hard to express my emotions clearly in a group, so I prefer talking to one friend.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a face to face communicate”应为“face-to-face communication”，且表达稍显口语化。建议使用更正式的表达并注意冠词和名词形式。

範例: It depends. When I need comfort, I prefer face-to-face communication because my friends can give me a hug. But if the conversation is not urgent, I think social media is more convenient and saves time.

建議: 回答中有重复和语气词过多，且时态使用不够准确。建议减少口头语，注意时态一致性，并使表达更简洁流畅。

範例: Not really. I used to argue with my friends when I was a child, but now we try to solve problems calmly together. When I'm struggling, my friends comfort me, and we celebrate together when things go well.

× I think she can really gives me useful advices and it relax me.

✓ I think she can really give me useful advice and it relaxes me.

动词在第三人称单数时，谓语动词需要去掉-s或加-s，且advice是不可数名词，不用复数形式。这里'she'是第三人称单数，动词用原形give，因为can后面接动词原形；relax主语是it，第三人称单数，动词需加-s。

× I think she can really gives me useful advices and it relax me.

✓ I think she can really give me useful advice and it relaxes me.

advice是不可数名词，不能用复数形式advices，应使用advice。

× And you know, their speech can really gives me more ideas and help me to.

✓ And you know, their speech can really give me more ideas and help me too.

can后面动词用原形give，不能加-s；help me to应改为help me too，表示“也帮助我”。

× But one uh, but sometimes, uh, I can't express my emotional, uh, great in a group.

✓ But sometimes, I can't express my emotions, uh, great in a group.

emotional是形容词，需用名词emotions；句中重复使用but不合适，应删去多余的but。

× It really depends, you know, when I want to someone to comfort me, I would prefer a face to face communicate so my friends can give me a hug.

✓ It really depends, you know, when I want someone to comfort me, I would prefer face-to-face communication so my friends can give me a hug.

want后面直接接宾语someone，不用to；face-to-face是形容词，修饰communication，communication是名词，不能用动词communicate。

× Not really, I mean I used to argue with my friends while I was a kid but now we are trying to umm, solve the issue calmly and umm, solve the issue together.

✓ Not really, I mean I used to argue with my friends when I was a kid but now we are trying to, umm, solve the issues calmly and, umm, solve the issues together.

while用于表示两个动作同时发生，语境中用when更合适；issue前应加复数形式issues，表示多个问题。

× I mean when I was struggling my friends will comfort me and when things going well we will uh celebrate with each other so.

✓ I mean when I am struggling my friends will comfort me and when things are going well we will, uh, celebrate with each other.

表达现在或将来时，struggling前应加am，表示现在进行时；things going well缺少be动词are，应补充。