聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn, ví dụ như "I enjoy chatting" thay vì "I enjoyed chatting" và "without being scared" thay vì "without scared". Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như "for those who get me" mà nên nói "with those who understand me".

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially with those who understand me. We can talk about anything without being scared of being judged, and it's a great way for me to relax and express my emotions.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác như "dip into some emotion thing" nên sửa thành "discuss emotional topics" và "close friend" nên dùng số nhiều "close friends" nếu nói chung chung. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: It depends on the friend I'm talking with. If it's just a social friend, I usually don't discuss emotional topics or childhood memories. However, with my close friends, we can talk about everything, including our traumas, childhood, and memorable moments from the past.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "my only one friends" nên là "only one friend", "the one who gets me" nên là "the one who understands me", và "choke" có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng sai từ. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: I absolutely prefer chatting with only one friend because that friend understands me well. We can talk about everything without feeling awkward, such as daily life, family issues, trauma, and childhood memories. We also enjoy creating jokes and laughing together.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời câu hỏi khá đầy đủ nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ "its feel" nên là "it feels", "when you talking" nên là "when you are talking", và câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I am comfortable with both types of communication; however, if I have to choose, I would definitely prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more natural and connecting. For example, when you are talking to someone in real life, you can see their facial expressions and feel the vibe. Although talking on social media can be fun, it sometimes carries risks such as misunderstandings or privacy issues.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có nội dung rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như "a little bit of arguments" nên là "a few arguments" hoặc "some arguments", và câu cuối nên dùng thì hiện tại đơn "we still decide" hoặc quá khứ "we still decided" đồng nhất. Bạn cũng có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, which I think is quite normal. Arguments are hard to avoid in any relationship. For example, when we have disagreements that upset both of us, we might have a few arguments, but at the end of the day, we always decide to sit down and solve the problem together.

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friends, especially for those who get me.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially those who get me.

The sentence is about a general habit or preference, so the present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'enjoyed'.

× We can talk about everything without scared of being judged by anyone else and it's a good way for me to relax and express my emotions.

✓ We can talk about everything without being scared of being judged by anyone else, and it's a good way for me to relax and express my emotions.

The phrase 'without scared' is incorrect; it should be 'without being scared' to correctly use the gerund form after 'without'.

× It depends on the friend that I'm talking with.

✓ It depends on the friend that I'm talking to.

The correct preposition after 'talking' is 'to' rather than 'with'.

× If it's just a social friend, then I'm not gonna talk much or dip into some emotion thing or the childhood.

✓ If it's just a social friend, then I'm not going to talk much or dip into some emotional things or childhood topics.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. 'Emotion thing' is vague and should be 'emotional things'. 'The childhood' is incorrect; 'childhood' does not need 'the'.

× But with my close friend, we can talk about everything that exists.

✓ But with my close friends, we can talk about everything that exists.

The plural 'friends' is appropriate here because 'we' implies more than one person.

× We can talk about our trauma, childhood, or some memorable moments in the past.

✓ We can talk about our traumas, childhood, or some memorable moments in the past.

'Trauma' can be countable when referring to different experiences, so 'traumas' is more appropriate here.

× I absolutely prefer to have a chat with my only one friends because my friends are the one who gets me, they understand me so I can talk about everything without feeling awkward or comfortable.

✓ I absolutely prefer to have a chat with my only one friend because my friend is the one who gets me; they understand me so I can talk about everything without feeling awkward or uncomfortable.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'only one'. 'The one' should be 'the one' referring to singular. 'Comfortable' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'uncomfortable' to contrast with 'awkward'.

× For example, we can share about either daily life, our family issues, trauma, childhood and we can create, choke and laugh about everything.

✓ For example, we can share about daily life, our family issues, trauma, childhood, and we can create, joke, and laugh about everything.

'Either' is unnecessary here. 'Choke' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'joke'. Also, commas are needed before 'and' in a list.

× I am comfortable with both types of communications, however if I have to choose I would definitely go for having a conversation in real life since its feel more natural and connecting.

✓ I am comfortable with both types of communication; however, if I have to choose, I would definitely go for having a conversation in real life since it feels more natural and connecting.

'Communications' should be singular 'communication' when referring to types. 'Its' should be 'it' and 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject.

× For example, when you talking to someone in real life you can see their facial expressions and you can feel the vibe.

✓ For example, when you are talking to someone in real life, you can see their facial expressions and you can feel the vibe.

The verb 'talking' needs the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense.

× While talking to someone on social media can be fun but there's a risk that you can be in danger because you.

✓ While talking to someone on social media can be fun, there is a risk that you can be in danger.

The sentence is incomplete and has a redundant conjunction 'but' after 'while'. The phrase 'because you' is incomplete and should be removed or completed.

× Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Arguments are hard to avoid in any type of relationship.

✓ Arguments are hard to avoid in any type of relationship.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× For example, when we have contradictions which upset both of us, we might have a little bit of arguments, but at the end of the day we still decided to sit back and solve the problem with each other.

✓ For example, when we have contradictions which upset both of us, we might have a few arguments, but at the end of the day we still decide to sit back and solve the problem with each other.

'A little bit of arguments' is incorrect; 'a few arguments' is correct for countable nouns. 'Decided' should be 'decide' to maintain present tense consistency.