聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'I do enjoy chatting with my friends' and then explaining the challenge, you can combine these ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, although speaking in English can be challenging since it's not my native language. However, I'm working hard to improve so I can communicate more confidently.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'often parents about our old memories'. Try to structure your answer clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect ideas. Be specific and avoid vague expressions.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics. For instance, we often reminisce about old memories and discuss our future plans, which helps us stay connected. Sometimes, we also talk about our assignments to support each other, and occasionally, we chat about other people just for fun.

建議: Good answer but avoid small errors like 'a chatting'. Use linking words like 'however' properly to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to be more concise and natural in your expression.

範例: It depends. If the person is really close to me, I enjoy talking to them all day because we share a strong bond. However, I also like chatting with a group of friends, especially when we have interesting conversations and share different opinions.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'Media I generally prefer communicate'. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, be more specific about why you prefer each method.

範例: I generally prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows better understanding through body language and facial expressions. However, if someone lives far away, I use social media or online platforms to stay in touch. Overall, I like both methods as they are convenient and help me maintain good communication.

建議: Your answer has unclear phrases like 'days supplements' and filler sounds like 'MMM'. Avoid these and use clear, correct vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: I sometimes argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often. Usually, disagreements are caused by misunderstandings or different opinions on certain topics. However, we always try to resolve these arguments quickly by discussing things calmly.

× With friends. I usually chat with my friends about a variety of things.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about a variety of things.

The phrase 'With friends.' is a sentence fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be removed to maintain proper sentence structure.

× For example, often parents about our old memories or discuss our future plans which help us stay connected.

✓ For example, we often talk about our old memories or discuss our future plans which help us stay connected.

The original sentence lacks a verb and subject in the first clause, making it incomplete. Adding 'we often talk' corrects the sentence structure.

× Sometimes even talk about our assignments to help each other out.

✓ Sometimes we even talk about our assignments to help each other out.

The sentence is missing the subject 'we', which is necessary for a complete sentence.

× And occasionally we could speak about other people just for fun.

✓ Occasionally, we speak about other people just for fun.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and 'could speak' is less appropriate here; using 'speak' is more natural and concise.

× However, I also enjoy a chatting with a group of friends, especially when we have interesting conversation and share different opinions.

✓ However, I also enjoy chatting with a group of friends, especially when we have interesting conversations and share different opinions.

The article 'a' before 'chatting' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a gerund here. Also, 'conversation' should be plural to match 'interesting' and the context.

× Media I generally prefer communicate in person because it allows better understanding through body language and facial expression.

✓ I generally prefer to communicate in person because it allows better understanding through body language and facial expressions.

The word 'Media' at the beginning is misplaced and should be removed. Also, 'prefer communicate' needs 'to' before 'communicate'. 'Facial expression' should be plural to match 'body language'.

× Usually our days supplements are caused by misunderstanding or different opinions on certain topics.

✓ Usually our disagreements are caused by misunderstandings or different opinions on certain topics.

'Days supplements' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'disagreements'. Also, 'misunderstanding' should be plural to match the context.

× However, we always try to resolve these arguments quickly by taking things through calmly.

✓ However, we always try to resolve these arguments quickly by going through things calmly.

The phrase 'taking things through' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'going through things' when referring to resolving issues.