聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh các câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day at school. We often share interesting stories and have fun, which makes me feel refreshed and less stressed.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about films and the types of movies we like. We also talk about games because we often play them together.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị ngắt quãng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu, sử dụng từ nối và sửa lỗi để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are many different opinions and stories to share. This makes the conversation more entertaining and fun, and I also feel more relaxed when I am with a group.

建議: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more relaxed and natural. When we talk in person, we can express our emotions better and understand each other more clearly through body language.

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và giải thích lý do rõ ràng hơn.

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends because we have a friendly relationship. We usually try to understand each other's opinions and avoid conflicts.

× Every long day at school.

✓ After every long day at school,

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'After' and a comma connects it properly to the following sentence, forming a complete thought.

× Talking with my friends allows me to share my throat and have fun, which is very refreshing and helps me forget about stress.

✓ Talking with my friends allows me to share my thoughts and have fun, which is very refreshing and helps me forget about stress.

The phrase 'share my throat' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'share my thoughts'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects sentence meaning.

× For example, we often discuss in interesting.

✓ For example, we often discuss interesting topics.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'discuss'. Adding 'interesting topics' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I usually chat with my friend about the topic like film or the what film we like and games.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about topics like films we like and games.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'friend' and 'topic' when plural forms 'friends' and 'topics' are appropriate. Also, 'the what film we like' is ungrammatical and replaced with 'films we like'.

× We always playing games together.

✓ We always play games together.

The verb 'playing' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct simple present tense is 'play' to match the adverb 'always'.

× Is make the conversation more entertaining and fun as we can talk about VA various topics together.

✓ It makes the conversation more entertaining and fun as we can talk about various topics together.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'Is' should be 'It' and the verb should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× Also, being in a group help me feel more relaxed and.

✓ Also, being in a group helps me feel more relaxed.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'being in a group'. The sentence is also incomplete; the trailing 'and' is removed.

× I prefer communicate face to face because it it feels more relaxed and natural.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more relaxed and natural.

The verb 'communicate' requires the infinitive form 'to communicate' after 'prefer'. Also, the repeated 'it' is corrected to a single 'it'.

× Also conversation have been.

✓ Also, conversations have been helpful.

The singular noun 'conversation' does not agree with the plural verb 'have'. Changing to plural 'conversations' matches the verb. The sentence is incomplete and is completed with 'helpful' for clarity.

× No, I don't because I and my friends very friendly.

✓ No, I don't because my friends and I are very friendly.

The pronoun order should be 'my friends and I' and the verb 'are' is needed to complete the sentence. The original sentence lacks a verb and has incorrect pronoun order.

× We don't like.

✓ We don't like to argue.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'like'. Adding 'to argue' completes the meaning in context.