聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. For example, say "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and share daily news."

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and share daily news with them.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific about topics and avoid vague phrases like "maybe."

範例: I usually chat about what happened during the day, my daily routine, and any upcoming visits or plans I have.

建議: Reduce filler words and complete your sentences. Clearly explain your preference with reasons and linking words.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in groups there are different ideas, and as an introvert, I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.

建議: Use more precise vocabulary and avoid informal phrases like "you know." Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express emotions clearly, which is difficult to do through social media.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar opinions and enjoy the same types of singers, movies, and series.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because because when I chatting with friends I I don't feel lonely and I want to share some news with my friends and in a day.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because when I am chatting with friends, I don't feel lonely and I want to share some news with my friends during the day.

The phrase 'when I chatting' is incorrect because the verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'when I am chatting'. Also, 'and in a day' is unclear and should be 'during the day' to express the time frame properly.

× Maybe what happened in day, my daily routine, what I done with today, Maybe when I'm going to somewhere I also chat friends about this visits and.

✓ Maybe what happened during the day, my daily routine, what I have done today. Maybe when I'm going somewhere, I also chat with friends about these visits.

The phrase 'what I done with today' is incorrect; the present perfect tense 'have done' is needed to indicate completed actions relevant to the present. Also, 'going to somewhere' should be 'going somewhere' without 'to'. 'Chat friends' should be 'chat with friends' to use the correct preposition. 'This visits' should be 'these visits' to match plural form.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend, uh, because, uh, because, umm, in a group of people there were, uh, some different ideas and I don't like communicate with many people because I'm introvert and I like.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because in a group of people there are some different ideas, and I don't like to communicate with many people because I'm an introvert and I like it.

The phrase 'there were some different ideas' is incorrect in present tense context; it should be 'there are some different ideas'. Also, 'I don't like communicate' needs the infinitive form 'to communicate'. 'I'm introvert' requires the article 'an' before 'introvert'. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'and I like it' to finish the thought.

× It is so good to communicate face to face because our emotion is so good to show or communicate face to face. And when you chat with someone, you cannot show your feelings and emotions, you know?

✓ It is so good to communicate face to face because our emotions are easy to show when communicating face to face. And when you chat with someone online, you cannot show your feelings and emotions, you know?

The phrase 'our emotion is so good to show' is awkward; 'our emotions are easy to show' is clearer. Also, 'or communicate face to face' is redundant and unclear. Adding 'when communicating face to face' clarifies the meaning. 'Chat with someone' online should be specified to contrast with face-to-face communication.

× No, not really argue with my friends because we have matching ideas and uh, uh, for example, we are similar, we have similar uh, opinions. Uh, we love uh, simple same type of singers, movies, series and others.

✓ No, I don't really argue with my friends because we have matching ideas. For example, we have similar opinions. We like the same types of singers, movies, series, and others.

The phrase 'not really argue' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't really argue'. 'Simple same type of singers' is incorrect; 'the same types of singers' is correct to express similarity. Also, 'we love' is better as 'we like' for preferences. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.