聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Попробуйте говорить более связно и избегать повторений и пауз, таких как "we don't, we can't uh". Используйте более простые и четкие конструкции, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because many of them live far away, so chatting helps us stay connected.

建議: Старайтесь использовать более точные и разнообразные слова, избегайте повторений, например, "we we". Также улучшите структуру предложения, чтобы ответ был более логичным и связным.

範例: We usually talk about our future plans, upcoming meetings, social media trends, our mutual friends, and hobbies.

建議: Избегайте лишних пауз и повторений, таких как "uh" и "umm". Используйте правильные формы слов, например, "one or two people" вместо "one or two person". Постарайтесь строить предложения более грамотно и уверенно.

範例: Honestly, I am an introvert, so I prefer chatting with one or two people because I feel uncomfortable speaking in large groups.

建議: Старайтесь формулировать мысли более ясно и избегать повторений, например, "what's what's". Используйте более точные выражения, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и понятным.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand my friends' feelings and intentions better than through social media.

建議: Избегайте повторений, таких как "a a". Используйте правильные формы слов, например, "discussions" вместо "discuss" и "big arguments" вместо "big argue". Постарайтесь строить предложения грамотно и избегать ошибок.

範例: Most of the time, we don't argue, but occasionally we have discussions that can turn into serious arguments.

× Honestly, I adore it because I have a lot of friends around the world and we don't, we can't uh, meet which with each other and that's why we have a chat and I really like it.

✓ Honestly, I adore it because I have a lot of friends around the world and we can't meet with each other, and that's why we have a chat and I really like it.

The phrase 'meet which with each other' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'meet' in this context is 'with'. Also, 'which' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The corrected phrase is 'meet with each other'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Honestly, we have a chat about our future, our meets, umm especially we we enjoy to talk about social medias, our friends and our hobby.

✓ Honestly, we have a chat about our future, our meetings, umm especially we enjoy talking about social media, our friends, and our hobbies.

The word 'meets' should be 'meetings' to correctly refer to planned gatherings. 'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. 'Enjoy to talk' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'talking'. Also, 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' to match the plural context.

× Uh, frankly speaking, I'm introvert. Uh, that's why I prefer to talk about, to talk with one or two person, uh, because I'm scary to talk to a big group. Umm, yeah.

✓ Uh, frankly speaking, I'm an introvert. Uh, that's why I prefer to talk with one or two people, uh, because I'm scared to talk to a big group. Umm, yeah.

The noun 'introvert' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. 'One or two person' should be 'one or two people' because 'person' is singular and 'people' is the plural form. 'I'm scary' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I'm scared' to express feeling fear.

× Actually, I can say that I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because I can know what's the feeling or what are they meaning because I don't know what's what's the meaning in the via social media.

✓ Actually, I can say that I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because I can understand their feelings and what they mean, because I don't know the meaning through social media.

The phrase 'what's the feeling or what are they meaning' is awkward; 'understand their feelings and what they mean' is clearer. 'In the via social media' is incorrect; 'through social media' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'can know' is better expressed as 'can understand' in this context.

× For the most part we don't argue, but we have a a few moments when we have discuss and have a big argue.

✓ For the most part, we don't argue, but we have a few moments when we discuss and have big arguments.

The phrase 'have discuss' is incorrect; it should be 'discuss' as a verb without 'have'. 'Have a big argue' is incorrect; the noun form is 'argument', and it should be plural 'arguments' to match 'a few moments'. Also, the repeated 'a a' is a typo and should be corrected.