聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Старайтесь избегать повторений и лишних слов, а также улучшить грамматическую структуру. Например, используйте правильные формы глаголов и стройте предложения более естественно.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and connected. I have many friends, and talking with them helps me relax. Since childhood, I have always been a talkative person.

建議: Избегайте использования слов-паразитов и старайтесь выражать мысли более чётко и связно, используя связующие слова для логичности.

範例: We usually chat about many things, starting from our childhood memories to our current lives. Since we are all students, most of our conversations focus on university, education, and internships.

建議: Работайте над грамматикой и избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов. Также старайтесь строить предложения более плавно и логично.

範例: I definitely prefer chatting with one friend. Her name is Sophia, and we met five years ago. She is my best friend because she understands me well, unlike when I talk in a group.

建議: Сократите количество пауз и слов-паразитов, используйте более точные слова и стройте предложения более связно.

範例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because we can use facial expressions and gestures to express our ideas clearly. I think social media lacks this personal touch.

建議: Избегайте повторений и слов-паразитов, формулируйте мысли чётко и логично, используя связующие слова.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends. Sometimes we have small disagreements about trivial things, but I never argue aggressively because I care about them and they care about me.

× when I chatting with them I feel really, really good

✓ when I am chatting with them I feel really, really good

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly here.

× I was very, very talkative people

✓ I was a very, very talkative person

The subject is singular ('I'), so 'people' (plural) is incorrect; it should be 'person'.

× which art about everything we chat about

✓ which is about everything we chat about

The phrase 'which art about' is incorrect; 'which is about' correctly introduces the topic.

× I definitely prefer chat with my, uh, one friend

✓ I definitely prefer to chat with my, uh, one friend

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to chat' is required, not the bare verb 'chat'.

× we are like meet, uh, five years ago

✓ we met, uh, five years ago

The past simple tense 'met' is needed to describe a completed action in the past; 'are like meet' is incorrect.

× I love talking with them, uh, with her because she understands me

✓ I love talking with her because she understands me

The pronoun 'them' is plural and inconsistent with 'her' (singular); it should be 'her' only.

× But uh, in company mostly time they don't

✓ But uh, in company most of the time they don't

The phrase 'mostly time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time'.

× I definitely prefer, uh, communicate face to face

✓ I definitely prefer, uh, to communicate face to face

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to communicate' is required, not the bare verb 'communicate'.

× with our mimic or with our like, umm, I don't know how to say, uh, with hands

✓ with our facial expressions or with our, like, umm, I don't know how to say, uh, hands

The word 'mimic' is incorrectly used; 'facial expressions' is the correct term here.

× I don't really, umm, aggressively argue with them because they're all my friends and I love them, so they too

✓ I don't really, umm, aggressively argue with them because they're all my friends and I love them, so they love me too

The phrase 'so they too' is incomplete; it should be 'so they love me too' to be clear.