聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'Non satty' jasto shabda ko prayog spashta chhaina ra artha bujhna garo chha. Tapai le online chatting ra real interaction ko tulana gardai cha, tara uttar thap spashta ra sangathit banau. 5 vaakya bhitra simit rakhnu hos.

範例: No, I don't really enjoy chatting online with friends. I prefer meeting them in person because face-to-face conversations feel more genuine and meaningful. Online chatting often lacks the emotional connection that real meetings provide.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma anavashyak filler shabda haru jastai 'uh', 'umm' ko prayog kam garnu parcha. Uttar lai spashta ra sangathit banau, ra linking words jastai 'usually', 'for example' prayog garnu hos. Varnan ma thap vistrit tatha specific details sametnu hos.

範例: I don't chat very often, but when I do, I usually ask my friends about what they have been doing recently. For example, we discuss activities we can plan together in the near future.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap linking words jastai 'because', 'also' ko prayog ramro cha, tara thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'Eradicates confusion' jasto shabda ko prayog thik cha, tara sentence structure lai thap sudhar garnu parcha.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it makes the conversation clearer and avoids confusion. Also, group chats often have many ideas, which can be difficult to manage or act upon.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma bistarit ra spashta kura haru chan, tara 'And I love it' jasto vaakya haru avoid garnu hos. Sentence haru lai thap sangathit ra prabhavit banau, ra linking words jastai 'because', 'therefore' prayog garnu hos.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions and reactions better. Although I use social media to stay updated with news, real-time conversations feel more meaningful to me.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra sangathit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'I don't like conflicts and not conflicts' jasto vaakya spashta chhaina. Sentence haru lai logical flow ma rakhnu hos ra linking words jastai 'however', 'sometimes' prayog garnu hos.

範例: I don't often argue with my friends because I dislike conflicts. However, sometimes we have discussions when we disagree on certain topics, but these are usually calm and respectful.

× I don't actually.

✓ I don't, actually.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'don't' to separate the negation from the adverb 'actually'. This improves clarity and naturalness in English.

× I'm a non satty person.

✓ I'm a non-chatty person.

The word 'satty' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'chatty' meaning talkative. 'Non-chatty' means not talkative, which fits the intended meaning.

× I like to meet with people and have real conversation instead of online chatting and online conferencing.

✓ I like to meet people and have real conversations instead of online chatting and online conferencing.

The verb 'meet' is usually followed directly by the object without 'with'. Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the general sense.

× I do not think it is more it is authentic than real interaction.

✓ I do not think it is more authentic than real interaction.

The phrase 'more it is authentic' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'it is' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I don't sad that often, uh, but if I do, I normally ask my friends about, umm, the thing they are doing, they are recently engaged in and various, uh, activities that we could do, uh, in the days to come.

✓ I don't chat that often, uh, but if I do, I normally ask my friends about, umm, the things they are doing, that they are recently engaged in, and various, uh, activities that we could do, uh, in the days to come.

The word 'sad' is a typo and should be 'chat'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'various activities'. Adding 'that' clarifies the relative clause.

× And mostly I, I talk to friend when we are planning to.

✓ And mostly I talk to friends when we are planning to.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of talking to more than one person.

× I enjoyed chatting with only one friend because it clears the conversation and eradicates confusion and that the group setting might creates.

✓ I enjoy chatting with only one friend because it clears the conversation and eradicates confusion that the group setting might create.

The verb tense should be present 'enjoy' to match the general preference. Also, 'creates' should be base form 'create' after 'might'. The phrase 'and that' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Also there are lots of ideas which could be confusing to implement or to do when we are in a group chat.

✓ Also, there are lots of ideas which could be confusing to implement or do when we are in a group chat.

The phrase 'to do' is redundant after 'to implement' and can be omitted for conciseness.

× I only use social media to get news and what's happening around here and there.

✓ I only use social media to get news and find out what's happening around here and there.

Adding 'find out' clarifies the action related to 'what's happening'. The original sentence is understandable but can be improved for clarity.

× I prefer face to face interaction and real time conversation by which I will get to know the person's emotion, reactions and feelings about certain topics we are discussing.

✓ I prefer face-to-face interaction and real-time conversation through which I can get to know the person's emotions, reactions, and feelings about certain topics we are discussing.

'Face-to-face' and 'real-time' should be hyphenated adjectives. 'By which' is better replaced with 'through which'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'reactions and feelings'.

× I don't like conflicts and not conflicts.

✓ I don't like conflicts and arguments.

The phrase 'and not conflicts' is contradictory and unclear. Replacing it with 'and arguments' clarifies the meaning.

× But occasionally we tend to discuss about things because we cannot agree on everything that we talk.

✓ But occasionally we tend to discuss things because we cannot agree on everything that we talk about.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'talk' should be followed by 'about' to complete the phrase 'talk about'.