聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trực tiếp, nhưng nên tránh dùng từ 'Oh of course' quá thân mật và câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tránh thừa từ. Bạn cũng nên thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us understand each other better. For example, we often share our daily experiences and support each other.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngập ngừng như 'uh' và 'I can tell' không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả chủ đề trò chuyện.

範例: We usually talk about our studies, such as upcoming exams or homework assignments, to help each other understand the material better.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng câu cú hơi dài và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'different personalities' và 'express my point well'.

範例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I trust them the most. In a group, different personalities can make it hard to express my point clearly.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'it depends' thay vì 'it's depend', và câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính thức như 'Like you know'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Honestly, it depends on who I am chatting with. If I have met the person in real life, I feel more confident communicating face-to-face.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ 'it happens' thay vì 'is happen'. Bạn cũng nên mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: Yes, we argue quite often, but not seriously. Usually, our arguments are about homework or school tasks when we have different opinions.

× Well, I can tell, uh, we usually chat about our study or discuss about our homework that day.

✓ Well, I can tell, uh, we usually chat about our studies or discuss our homework that day.

The noun 'study' should be pluralized to 'studies' to correctly refer to multiple subjects or areas of study. Also, the verb 'discuss' should not be followed by the preposition 'about'; 'discuss' is a transitive verb and takes a direct object without 'about'.

× Hmm As for me, I would like to chat with only one friend who is my best friend and I trust them the most because I think in a group of people who have different personality we cannot get my point well.

✓ Hmm, as for me, I would like to chat with only one friend who is my best friend and whom I trust the most because I think in a group of people who have different personalities we cannot get my point across well.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect when referring to a singular 'one friend'; it should be 'whom' as the object of 'trust'. Also, 'personality' should be plural 'personalities' to agree with 'people'. The phrase 'get my point well' is awkward; 'get my point across well' is the correct expression.

× Honestly I think it's depend on who am I chatting with.

✓ Honestly, I think it depends on who I am chatting with.

The verb 'depend' requires the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, the word order in the clause 'who am I chatting with' should be 'who I am chatting with' as it is a subordinate clause.

× Like you know, if there's someone I already met them in personally I think it's more confident for me to communicate with them.

✓ Like you know, if there's someone I have already met in person, I think it's more comfortable for me to communicate with them.

The pronoun 'them' is redundant after 'someone I already met'; it should be omitted. 'In personally' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in person'. Also, 'more confident' should be 'more comfortable' to express ease in communication.

× Hmm, I can tell is happen quite regularly, but it's not in serious way.

✓ Hmm, I can tell it happens quite regularly, but it's not in a serious way.

The phrase 'I can tell is happen' is incorrect; it should be 'I can tell it happens' with the verb in third person singular present tense. Also, 'in serious way' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× We usually argue about our homework or our task on school.

✓ We usually argue about our homework or our tasks at school.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to location; 'at school' is the correct preposition. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'our'.