聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は自然ですが、文が断片的で冗長な部分があります。文をつなげて、より流暢で効果的な答えにしましょう。例えば、"I often hang out with my friends, drink some alcohol, and chat all night."のように一文でまとめると良いです。

範例: Yes, absolutely. I often hang out with my friends, drink some alcohol, and chat all night.

建議: 文法ミスと語彙の選択に注意が必要です。"must talk talked"は誤りで、"usually talk about"が適切です。また、"love conditions"より"relationships"、"beauties"より"beauty"が自然です。内容も具体的にすると良いです。

範例: Well, we usually talk about gossip, our relationships, and topics like beauty and fashion.

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、表現をより自然にし、文法を改善しましょう。"group of people chatting is more powerful"は不自然なので、"chatting in a group is more lively and enjoyable"などにすると良いです。

範例: I like both types of chatting because chatting in a group is more lively and enjoyable, but chatting with only one friend allows me to focus more.

建議: 答えは明確で自然ですが、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。例えば、"because"の前に"I prefer face-to-face communication"を加えると良いです。

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can't see their faces or get feelings from their expressions when chatting via social media.

建議: 文法と語順に多くの誤りがあります。"she have"は"she has"、"opposite personality from me"は"opposite personality to mine"が正しいです。内容も明確にしましょう。

範例: Not really. If I argue with someone, it's usually my mother because she has a personality opposite to mine, so it sometimes happens.

× Yes, absolutely. I often hang out with my friends and drink some alcohol and. Chatting. All night.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often hang out with my friends, drink some alcohol, and chat all night.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Chatting. All night.' is a fragment and should be combined into a complete sentence. Also, the conjunction 'and' is misplaced before a period. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and forms a complete sentence.

× Well, we must talk talked about gossips or our love conditions or beauties and fashions.

✓ Well, we usually talk about gossip, our love lives, beauty, and fashion.

The phrase 'must talk talked' is incorrect; 'talked' is past tense but the context requires present tense. 'Gossips' should be 'gossip' as an uncountable noun. 'Love conditions' is unnatural; 'love lives' is more appropriate. 'Beauties and fashions' should be 'beauty and fashion' for natural expression.

× I do love both types of chatting because umm group of people chatting is more powerful and enjoyable but the only one friend chatting is more focusing.

✓ I do love both types of chatting because group chats are more lively and enjoyable, but chatting with only one friend is more focused.

'Group of people chatting' is awkward; 'group chats' is more natural. 'The only one friend chatting' is incorrect; 'chatting with only one friend' is better. 'More powerful' is not appropriate here; 'more lively' or 'more enjoyable' fits better. 'More focusing' should be 'more focused'.

× I actually don't like chatting with social media because I can't see their faces and I can't get the feelings from their expressions.

✓ I actually don't like chatting on social media because I can't see their faces and can't get feelings from their expressions.

The correct preposition is 'on' social media, not 'with'. Also, 'get the feelings' is better as 'get feelings' in this context.

× MMM not really I if I argue with someone it's my mother and she have opposite personality from me so mine so it sometimes happened.

✓ Hmm, not really. If I argue with someone, it's my mother, and she has an opposite personality to mine, so it sometimes happens.

'She have' is incorrect; it should be 'she has' to agree with the singular subject. 'Opposite personality from me' should be 'opposite personality to mine'. 'It sometimes happened' should be 'it sometimes happens' to maintain present tense consistency.