聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve naturalness. Instead of repeating 'enjoy', you can use synonyms and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends, especially during my free time. It helps me relax and catch up on each other's lives.

建議: Try to be more specific and clear in your answers. Use correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: We often talk about our future plans, like career goals and personal development. For instance, we discuss ways to improve our cooking skills and how to excel in our studies. Additionally, we sometimes share our thoughts about the qualities we want in a future spouse.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you can add linking words and a bit more detail to make it more natural and engaging.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one, especially for sensitive topics. This way, I can speak more openly without worrying about others' opinions.

建議: Good answer with examples. To improve, correct grammar mistakes and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I like both face-to-face and social media communication. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can see the other person's reactions. For example, when my friend had exam problems, I comforted her better by talking in person.

建議: Your answer is good and clear. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your response more fluent.

範例: I rarely argue with my friends because we understand each other well and communicate effectively. This helps us avoid conflicts and maintain a strong friendship.

× I sincerely enjoy having quality discussion with friends.

✓ I sincerely enjoy having quality discussions with friends.

The noun 'discussion' should be plural 'discussions' because it refers to multiple instances of talking with friends, not just one.

× We usually have discussions about the futures.

✓ We usually have discussions about the future.

The word 'future' is generally uncountable and singular when referring to time ahead, so 'futures' is incorrect here.

× how to master in a major or a degree.

✓ how to master a major or a degree.

The verb 'master' does not require the preposition 'in' when followed by the object; it should be 'master a major'.

× We also have plans of what we want our future spouse to look like or.

✓ We also have plans about what we want our future spouse to look like.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' which is incomplete and incorrect; it should be rephrased to complete the thought properly.

× my friend was had an issue with an exam telling her face to face I could see her reaction and know how to comfort her.

✓ my friend had an issue with an exam; telling her face to face, I could see her reaction and know how to comfort her.

The phrase 'was had' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'had'. Also, the sentence needs punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× We also have good communication skills that helps us express ourselves.

✓ We also have good communication skills that help us express ourselves.

The plural subject 'skills' requires the plural verb 'help' instead of 'helps'.