聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有點過去式，建議用現在式來表達習慣性的行為，並且可以更自然地連接句子，例如使用連接詞。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and we can share different ideas. For example, I often talk with them during recess or after school.

建議: 回答中有口語化的語氣詞和重複，建議使用更正式的詞彙和結構，並避免重複。

範例: My friends and I usually talk about sports, especially basketball games such as the NBA or Taiwanese basketball competitions.

建議: 回答中有重複詞語和語法錯誤，建議注意語句流暢和避免重複，並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。

範例: I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I am more of an introvert. Talking to a small number of people makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed, and I find it difficult to speak in front of many people.

建議: 回答中有發音或拼寫錯誤（如"UMM"和"conversa conversations"），建議注意發音和拼寫，並使句子更自然流暢。

範例: I prefer to communicate via social media, such as texting or emailing, because I find it difficult to maintain eye contact during face-to-face conversations, which often makes me feel nervous and less relaxed.

建議: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複，建議使用更準確的語法和詞彙，並使句子更簡潔。

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we discuss basketball games or solve complex math problems. For example, we often debate which team plays better or the best way to solve a difficult problem. These arguments help us understand different perspectives and improve our thinking skills.

× Oh, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it helped me feel relaxed and also we can share different ideas.

✓ Oh, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and also we can share different ideas.

The question is in present tense asking about a general habit, so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'enjoyed' and 'helped' (past tense) is incorrect here. Use 'enjoy' and 'helps' to match the present tense context.

× Me and my friends usually talk about sports games 'cause we love to watch basketball games, for example, NBA or Taiwanese basketball competitions.

✓ My friends and I usually talk about sports games 'cause we love to watch basketball games, for example, NBA or Taiwanese basketball competitions.

The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of 'me' when it is the subject of the sentence. Also, it is polite to mention others before oneself, so 'My friends and I' is correct.

× I prefer to communicate by social media such as texting or emailing because I find it difficult to maintain eye contact with UMM during face to face conversa conversations.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media such as texting or emailing because I find it difficult to maintain eye contact with UMM during face-to-face conversations.

The correct preposition to use with 'social media' is 'via' not 'by'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective, and 'conversations' should be plural.

× This often makes me feel nervous and less relaxed.

✓ These often make me feel nervous and less relaxed.

The pronoun 'This' refers to plural things (like 'face-to-face conversations'), so it should be 'These' and the verb should be plural 'make' to agree with the plural subject.

× I also I find very difficult to speak speak in front of many people.

✓ I also find it very difficult to speak in front of many people.

The sentence has a repeated word 'speak speak' which is a typo. Also, 'find very difficult to speak' needs the pronoun 'it' as the object to be grammatically correct.

× For example, we often debate which team play better or the best way to approach a different problem difficult problem.

✓ For example, we often debate which team plays better or the best way to approach a different difficult problem.

The subject 'team' is singular, so the verb should be 'plays' not 'play'. Also, 'different problem difficult problem' is redundant; 'different difficult problem' is correct.