聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'actually', you can say: 'I love chatting with friends because it boosts my confidence and enhances my communication skills, which in turn helps me network effectively for my business.'

範例: I love chatting with friends because it boosts my confidence and improves my communication skills. Consequently, I can network better, which benefits my business.

建議: Be careful with grammar and sentence structure. Also, provide complete and clear examples. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. For instance, you can say: 'I usually chat about globalization and our common interests like Bollywood, gossip, and different cuisines. For example, I recently tried Thai cuisine, which was very tempting, so I shared my experience with my friends.'

範例: I usually chat about globalization and our shared interests such as Bollywood, gossip, and various cuisines. For example, I recently tried Thai food, which was delicious, so I told my friends about it.

建議: Improve your grammar and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. For example: 'I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to connect with others who share the same interests. For instance, I am part of a group of 12 people who have similar tastes, so I can easily relate to them.'

範例: I prefer chatting with groups because it helps me connect with people who share my interests. For example, I belong to a group of 12 friends with similar hobbies, so we enjoy talking together.

建議: Avoid unclear words and filler sounds. Correct grammar mistakes and clarify your preference. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example: 'I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because it helps me interact better and understand people's social motivations. For instance, at parties or meetings, I always choose face-to-face communication.'

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to interact more effectively and understand others better. For example, at parties or meetings, I always talk directly with people.

建議: Reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion clearly. For example: 'No, I generally don't argue with friends because I appreciate their personal viewpoints. Moreover, I believe arguments can create chaos, so I prefer to avoid them.'

範例: No, I usually avoid arguments with friends because I respect their opinions. Also, I think arguments can cause unnecessary problems.

× I can do so many networking which actually helps with my business.

✓ I can do so much networking which actually helps with my business.

The word 'networking' is an uncountable noun, so it should be preceded by 'much' instead of 'many'. Using 'many' is incorrect here because 'networking' cannot be counted as individual items.

× My common interests are in Bollywood, gossips and different kinds of cuisines.

✓ My common interests are in Bollywood, gossip and different kinds of cuisines.

The word 'gossip' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'gossips'. Using 'gossips' is incorrect because it refers to individual rumors, but here it is used as a general interest.

× I had recently, for example, I had tried Thai cuisines which was more tempting, so I shared it with my.

✓ I recently, for example, tried Thai cuisine which was very tempting, so I shared it with my friends.

The past perfect tense 'had tried' is unnecessary here; simple past 'tried' is appropriate. Also, 'cuisines' should be singular 'cuisine' when referring to a type of food. The phrase 'shared it with my' is incomplete and should specify 'friends'. 'More tempting' is vague; 'very tempting' is clearer.

× I have a group which consists of 12 peoples.

✓ I have a group which consists of 12 people.

The plural of 'person' is 'people', not 'peoples'. 'Peoples' refers to ethnic groups, which is not the intended meaning here.

× They are similar in my test so I can connect with them easily.

✓ They are similar in my taste so I can connect with them easily.

The word 'test' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'taste' meaning preferences or interests.

× I prefer boats to communicate face to face or via social media.

✓ I prefer both to communicate face to face or via social media.

The word 'boats' is a typo and should be 'both' to indicate preference for two options.

× which can helps me to interact with people and understanding their social uh motivation.

✓ which can help me to interact with people and understand their social motivation.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'help' should be used, not 'helps'. Also, parallel structure requires 'understand' instead of 'understanding'.