聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có vẻ bị ngắt quãng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and share my thoughts regularly. For example, we often discuss personal relationships and school work, which strengthens our bond and helps me manage my studies better.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "my advices" và câu chưa rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng cụ thể.

範例: Usually, I chat with my friends about personal relationships and school homework. For instance, we share advice on how to handle difficult situations and help each other understand challenging assignments.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngập ngừng như "umm" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "others people" thành "other people". Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Personally, I enjoy chatting with a group because it allows me to hear diverse perspectives from other people, which makes me feel more connected through communication.

建議: Bạn cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "an introverted people" thành "an introverted person" và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media like Facebook or Instagram because I am an introverted person and feel shy talking face-to-face. Social media helps me connect with others more comfortably.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như "almost situations" nên là "most situations".

範例: Personally, I am a patient person, so I rarely get angry or impatient in most situations. Therefore, I seldom argue with my classmates because I prefer to listen and understand their opinions rather than create conflicts.

× This kind of conversation not only allows me to.

✓ This kind of conversation not only allows me to stay connected but also to share my thoughts.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object after 'allows me to'. It should be completed to express the full idea clearly.

× we often share my advices on how difficult situation and have each other understand challenging assignments.

✓ we often share advice on difficult situations and help each other understand challenging assignments.

'Advices' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'have each other understand' is incorrect; 'help each other understand' is the correct phrase.

× it allows me to have the diverse perspective from others people and umm make me feel, uh, connected with communication.

✓ it allows me to have diverse perspectives from other people and makes me feel connected through communication.

'The diverse perspective' should be plural 'diverse perspectives' to match the context. 'Others people' is incorrect; it should be 'other people'. Also, 'make me feel' should be 'makes me feel' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Well I'm an introverted people so I really shy to communicate face to face so via social media is help me connect with other people's without face to.

✓ Well, I'm an introverted person so I am really shy to communicate face to face, so via social media helps me connect with other people without face-to-face interaction.

'People' is plural, but 'I'm' refers to a singular person, so 'people' should be 'person'. 'Is help me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. 'Other people's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'other people'. The sentence also needs clearer phrasing for 'without face to'.