聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "Not only that" twice and correct grammar errors such as "give" to "gives". Try to use linking words smoothly and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them. Moreover, it gives me the chance to exchange information, especially when we cannot meet in person. Therefore, chatting is very helpful for maintaining our relationship.

建議: Your answer covers different topics well but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural expressions. For example, instead of "Not only that," use "Additionally" or "Also." Try to avoid repeating "sometimes" too often and make sentences more fluent.

範例: It depends on the topic. Sometimes we discuss the political situation, and other times we share personal updates. Additionally, we often plan trips or outings together.

建議: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer structure. Use linking words like "because" properly and avoid awkward phrases such as "too much busy" or "some situation arise." Try to be more specific and concise.

範例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in group chats, people are often busy and may not reply. Therefore, one-on-one chats feel more personal and effective.

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid phrases like "like some artificial"; instead, say "somewhat artificial." Also, use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media is very common nowadays and can feel somewhat artificial. Therefore, I find in-person conversations more genuine and preferable.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise language and better sentence structure. For example, say "depending on the situation and topic" and avoid awkward phrases like "a topic that is called." Also, try to link sentences smoothly.

範例: Yes, I do argue with my friends, depending on the situation and topic. For instance, last week I had a discussion with my best friend Mehdi about the geopolitics of Asia and the political situation in Bangladesh.

× Yes, I love chatting with friends because it helps me to connect with my favorite one.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with friends because it helps me to connect with my favorite ones.

The phrase 'my favorite one' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural, so the correct form is 'my favorite ones' to match the plural noun.

× Not only that, it sometimes give me the opportunity to exchange information and it's not always possible to talk with them, so chatting helps me a lot.

✓ Not only that, it sometimes gives me the opportunity to exchange information and it's not always possible to talk with them, so chatting helps me a lot.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in the present tense.

× It depends on what topic we are going to talk.

✓ It depends on what topic we are going to talk about.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' to indicate the subject of discussion.

× Not only that, sometimes we plan for a trip or to go outside for hang out.

✓ Not only that, sometimes we plan a trip or go outside to hang out.

The verb 'plan' does not need the preposition 'for' before 'a trip'. Also, 'for hang out' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to hang out'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because in Group chat everyone is too much busy and there are some situation arise when someone maybe don't reply my text.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because in group chats everyone is very busy and there are some situations that arise when someone may not reply to my text.

'Group chat' should be plural 'group chats' to generalize. 'Too much busy' is incorrect; 'very busy' is correct. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations'. 'Maybe don't reply' should be 'may not reply'. Also, 'reply my text' needs the preposition 'to'.

× So I prefer text with only one friend.

✓ So I prefer to text only one friend.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive 'to text' rather than 'text with'. Also, 'with only one friend' is unnecessary here.

× I love to communicate face to face rather than social media because nowadays social media is very common and I think it's like some artificial, so face to face communication is more preferable for myself.

✓ I love to communicate face to face rather than via social media because nowadays social media is very common and I think it's somewhat artificial, so face-to-face communication is more preferable for me.

The phrase 'rather than social media' needs the preposition 'via' to indicate the medium. 'Like some artificial' is incorrect; 'somewhat artificial' is correct. 'For myself' should be 'for me'. Also, 'face to face' as an adjective should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.

× Last week I argued with my best friend Mehdi about a topic that is called the geopolitics of the Asia and the overall political situation of Bangladesh.

✓ Last week I argued with my best friend Mehdi about a topic called the geopolitics of Asia and the overall political situation of Bangladesh.

The phrase 'that is called' is unnecessary and awkward; 'called' alone suffices. 'The Asia' is incorrect; 'Asia' does not need the definite article 'the'.