聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structures to sound more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often use messaging apps to stay in touch and share updates about our lives.

建議: Focus on directly answering the question by specifying topics you chat about. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetitive phrases like 'you know'.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities, school, and plans for the weekend because these topics help us stay connected.

建議: Provide a clear preference and explain your reason with specific details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences to improve clarity.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with friends because I find it easier to have meaningful conversations that way.

建議: Answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your preference with specific reasons and avoid filler words.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because as an introvert, I feel more comfortable expressing myself through text messages.

建議: Give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid hesitation sounds.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my close friends because disagreements are natural in any relationship, but we always resolve them quickly.

× I, uh, used to chat with my friends, you know, from the Yahoo messenger and, you know, it's so many times from past 10 and, uh, I used to, uh, sending texts to them and uh, you know, uh, participate in that way.

✓ I, uh, used to chat with my friends, you know, on Yahoo Messenger many times over the past 10 years, and, uh, I used to, uh, send texts to them and, uh, you know, participate in that way.

The phrase 'used to sending texts' is incorrect because 'used to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'it's so many times from past 10' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be rephrased to indicate frequency over a time period, such as 'many times over the past 10 years.' This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I, uh, used to chat with my friends, you know, from the Yahoo messenger and, you know, it's so many times from past 10 and, uh, I used to, uh, sending texts to them and uh, you know, uh, participate in that way.

✓ I, uh, used to chat with my friends, you know, on Yahoo Messenger many times over the past 10 years, and, uh, I used to, uh, send texts to them and, uh, you know, participate in that way.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'Yahoo messenger' and 'past 10.' The correct preposition for platforms is 'on' (e.g., 'on Yahoo Messenger'), and for time periods, 'over' or 'in the past' is appropriate. Using correct prepositions clarifies meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I used to, uh, sending texts to them and uh, you know, uh, participate in that way.

✓ I used to, uh, send texts to them and, uh, you know, participate in that way.

After 'used to,' the verb should be in its base form, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'sending' should be corrected to 'send.' This is a common error when using 'used to' to describe past habits.

× Sure, sending texts, you know in daily basis is very usual.

✓ Sure, sending texts, you know, on a daily basis is very usual.

The phrase 'in daily basis' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' as in 'on a daily basis.' Prepositions are important for indicating time expressions correctly.

× You know, in nowadays in our society, I believe that if you have, you know have want to have interaction with your friends, you have to text them.

✓ You know, nowadays in our society, I believe that if you want to have interaction with your friends, you have to text them.

The phrase 'have want to have' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'want to have.' Also, 'in nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is used without a preposition. Correct pronoun and phrase usage improves clarity.

× Actually, I'm not a, uh, people thing.

✓ Actually, I'm not a people person.

The phrase 'people thing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'people person' to indicate someone who enjoys being with others. Using the correct idiomatic expression is important for clear communication.

× but uh, I sending messages to my friends usually and, you know, to, uh, chat with them and, you know, uh, sending my hello and my.

✓ but, uh, I usually send messages to my friends and, you know, chat with them and, you know, send my hello and my greetings.

The verb 'sending' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'send' after 'I' for correct subject-verb agreement. Also, 'usually' is better placed before the verb. The sentence is incomplete at the end; adding 'greetings' completes the thought.

× Personally speaking, I'm an introvert, so do I do prefer to text my inmate intimate friends and, uh, you know, uh, it's uh, my thing to sending text, you know, and I do prefer that.

✓ Personally speaking, I'm an introvert, so I do prefer to text my intimate friends, and, uh, you know, it's, uh, my thing to send texts, you know, and I do prefer that.

The phrase 'do I do prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I do prefer.' Also, 'inmate' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'intimate.' 'To sending' should be 'to send' because after 'to' the base verb is used. Correct pronoun order and word choice improve clarity.

× If you have an intimate friend, you can't run from an argument with your friend.

✓ If you have an intimate friend, you can't run away from an argument with your friend.

The phrase 'run from an argument' is not idiomatic. The correct expression is 'run away from an argument.' This correction improves the naturalness of the sentence.

× And I do believe that it Co it comes and goes and uh, you know, uh, having conflicts with your friend is very common.

✓ And I do believe that it comes and goes, and, uh, you know, having conflicts with your friend is very common.

The phrase 'it Co it comes' seems to be a speech error; removing 'Co' corrects the sentence. The rest of the sentence is correct. Also, 'having conflicts' is correctly used as a gerund phrase here.