聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite natural and expresses your feelings well, but it is a bit long and has some redundancy. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and catch up on each other's lives. For instance, when I talk to my best friend, I feel calm and refreshed as we share our experiences and updates.

建議: Your answer covers the topic but lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Avoid filler words and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to make your answer coherent.

範例: I usually chat about daily life events and personal experiences. For example, we discuss both good and bad things happening in our lives, which helps us stay connected.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your preference with reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I prefer chatting with a few close friends rather than a group because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations with them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding filler words and making sentences clearer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words like 'however' or 'therefore'.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal; however, when time or distance is an issue, I use social media to stay in touch.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to give a concise response with clear reasons and use linking words like 'because' or 'although' to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when our opinions differ because I want to explain my point of view. However, I always try to keep the conversation healthy and respectful.

× talking about everything, what had happened in my life and you know, what's going on in my life and taking updates from them.

✓ talking about everything, what has happened in my life and you know, what's going on in my life and taking updates from them.

The past perfect tense 'had happened' is incorrect here because the context is about recent or current events. The present perfect 'has happened' is appropriate to indicate actions that have relevance to the present.

× When I talk to one of my best friend, I really enjoy spending time with her and talking to her.

✓ When I talk to one of my best friends, I really enjoy spending time with her and talking to her.

The phrase 'one of my best friend' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural when preceded by 'one of my'. It should be 'one of my best friends'.

× I usually there is no specific topics, it's just about what's going on in her life, what's wrong happened, what good things are happening with us.

✓ Usually, there are no specific topics; it's just about what's going on in her life, what went wrong, and what good things are happening with us.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there is' with the plural noun 'topics'. The correct form is 'there are'. Also, 'what wrong happened' is incorrect; it should be 'what went wrong'.

× what wrong happened

✓ what went wrong

The phrase 'what wrong happened' is grammatically incorrect. The correct past tense expression is 'what went wrong'.

× chatting, what had happened and you know, this sort of things we like to discuss.

✓ chatting, what has happened and you know, these sorts of things we like to discuss.

Again, 'had happened' is incorrect here; 'has happened' is appropriate. Also, 'this sort of things' should be 'these sorts of things' to agree in number.

× this sort of things we like to discuss.

✓ these sorts of things we like to discuss.

The phrase 'this sort of things' mixes singular 'this sort' with plural 'things'. It should be plural 'these sorts of things'.

× I do not prefer to group.

✓ I do not prefer groups.

The phrase 'prefer to group' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a noun or gerund. Here, 'groups' is the correct noun form.

× Whether I do not prefer to chat with a group of friends?

✓ I do not prefer to chat with a group of friends.

The sentence is incorrectly structured as a question with 'Whether'. It should be a statement without 'Whether'.

× I only prefer my few friends. I have only few friends.

✓ I only prefer my few friends. I have only a few friends.

The phrase 'only few friends' is incorrect; it should be 'only a few friends' to indicate a small number.

× or you know had a conversation with them.

✓ or you know have a conversation with them.

The past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the context is habitual action. The present tense 'have' is appropriate.

× I am very restrictive person when it comes to socializing myself.

✓ I am a very reserved person when it comes to socializing.

The phrase 'restrictive person' is incorrect; 'reserved person' is more appropriate. Also, 'socializing myself' is incorrect; 'socializing' alone suffices.

× It totally depends on what sort of availability I am having.

✓ It totally depends on what sort of availability I have.

The phrase 'availability I am having' is awkward. The simple present 'availability I have' is more natural.

× I sometime face to face meetings are more meaningful.

✓ Sometimes face-to-face meetings are more meaningful.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'.

× But I mean, when we do not have time or we are, you know, in different cities, we generally prefer to talk or to communicate via social media, yeah.

✓ But I mean, when we do not have time or we are, you know, in different cities, we generally prefer to talk or communicate through social media, yeah.

The preposition 'via' is acceptable but 'through' is more commonly used with 'communicate'. Also, 'to communicate' can be simplified to 'communicate'.

× Yeah, certainly we do argue if our opinions are not matching or if I think there is a point which I am confident about.

✓ Yeah, certainly we do argue if our opinions do not match or if I think there is a point I am confident about.

The phrase 'opinions are not matching' is incorrect; 'opinions do not match' is correct. Also, 'which I am confident about' should be 'I am confident about'.

× I do not generally argue argue, but I sort of make them understand of why I am right and why they need to change that perspective on that part.

✓ I do not generally argue, but I try to make them understand why I am right and why they need to change that perspective on that part.

The repeated 'argue argue' is an error. Also, 'make them understand of why' is incorrect; it should be 'make them understand why'. The verb 'try to make' is more natural.