聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'can chatting' và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời tránh những phần không rõ nghĩa như 'what's us for you today is more clone'. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us relax after a long day. We usually meet face-to-face to share our daily stories, which makes our friendship stronger and more enjoyable.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh những từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' hay 'umm'.

範例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily activities and routines. They also share their experiences with me, so we keep each other updated on our lives.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chia động từ và danh từ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng một cách logic và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ không rõ nghĩa như 'chess box' hoặc 'touch this one friend'.

範例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more fun and we can share many funny stories. However, sometimes I enjoy deep conversations with one close friend.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I have still do chattings'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ lý do. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh những câu không rõ nghĩa như 'I feel a little exercise'.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I use it more often than face-to-face conversations. Sometimes, I find it easier to share my thoughts online than in person.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'cloak needs and bones' hay 'sometimes got accurate'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác, trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng. Hãy tránh sử dụng những từ không đúng nghĩa và sắp xếp câu hợp lý.

範例: No, I don't argue with my friends often because our friendship is very strong. Sometimes we have different opinions, but we respect each other and remain good friends.

× We can chatting through share our daily story.

✓ We can chat and share our daily stories.

The verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'story' should be plural to match 'daily stories'.

× after a long day we can meet each other of two face to face talking to each other.

✓ After a long day, we can meet each other face to face and talk to each other.

The phrase 'of two' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'face to face'. Also, 'talking' should be changed to 'talk' to maintain parallel structure.

× Umm, what's us for you today is more clone, it's friendship and more exciting, more funny.

✓ Umm, what is important for you today is more close, it's friendship and more exciting, more funny.

The phrase 'what's us for you' is incorrect. It should be 'what is important for you'. Also, 'clone' should be 'close'.

× I went chatting with my friends, umm, also my friend share daily life to me.

✓ I chat with my friends, umm, and my friends also share their daily life with me.

The phrase 'I went chatting' is incorrect; 'I chat' is more appropriate for habitual actions. 'Share' should be 'shares' or 'share' depending on the subject, and 'to me' should be 'with me'.

× I prefer chat to a group of people instead of only one friends, because with more people we can share more funny story, we can play together in this chess box, uh, also touch this one friend can share umm, our day life or deep talk, but shall we small group of people?

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people instead of only one friend, because with more people we can share more funny stories, we can play together in this chess box, uh, also with one friend I can share our daily life or have deep talks, but shall we have a small group of people?

'Prefer' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'chatting'. 'One friends' should be 'one friend'. 'Funny story' should be plural 'funny stories'. 'Touch this one friend' is unclear and corrected to 'with one friend'. 'Day life' should be 'daily life'. 'Shall we small group of people?' is incorrect and corrected to 'shall we have a small group of people?'.

× I prefer via social media instead of communicate face to face because I have still do chattings on social media more than face to face.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media instead of face-to-face communication because I still chat on social media more than face to face.

'Prefer' should be followed by a verb in '-ing' form: 'communicating'. 'Via social media' should be preceded by 'communicating'. 'I have still do chattings' is incorrect; corrected to 'I still chat'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective.

× So when I communicate in real life to someone I feel a little exercise and not too much topic to share with.

✓ So when I communicate with someone in real life, I feel a little nervous and don't have too many topics to share.

'Communicate in real life to someone' should be 'communicate with someone in real life'. 'Feel a little exercise' is incorrect; likely meant 'feel a little nervous'. 'Not too much topic' should be 'don't have too many topics'.

× No, I'm not angry with my friends very often 'cause my friendship is very, very cloak needs and bones.

✓ No, I'm not angry with my friends very often because my friendship is very, very close, needed, and strong.

'Cloak needs and bones' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'close, needed, and strong' to describe the friendship.

× Also it's got, uh, sometimes got accurate because we have the different things or different opinions, but we have saw it and we still friends.

✓ Also, sometimes we have arguments because we have different things or different opinions, but we have resolved it and we are still friends.

'Got accurate' is incorrect; likely meant 'have arguments'. 'We have saw it' is incorrect; should be 'we have resolved it'. 'We still friends' should be 'we are still friends'.